Forewarning: I am a little cheesed, so you'll have to forgive any brutal comments. I tried to be biased but, well, you'll see.
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I had a lot of issues with this story, mostly characterization and some time-line things.
1) Artemis' age. Artemis was fifteen in The Time Paradox. Angeline, towards the end, even makes the Комментарий “Why are Ты still fifteen?” He was also fifteen in The Остаться в живых Colony. I'm going on assumption here, but I'm pretty sure The Atlantis Complex takes place after the events in TTP. So, if that's the case, how does Artemis'...
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