I don't like Twilight. I find the characters shallow; the plot boring and cliche; and the hidden messages frightening. But in the hands of another Автор - someone who wouldn't let their religious upbringing, their misogynistic views, and their twisted romantic ideals colour the story - it could have been really fantastic.
First off, the grammar would have to be fixed. The purple prose minimised and the в общем и целом, общая Письмо polished up.
Next the characters would have to be made realistic, their actions have an effect on the plot, and their history an effect on them.
Okay, i decided to write a critical analysis of a character from the twilight series. My first choice would have been to do one on Bella Swan, but there is already a whole spot dedicated to that, so i decided on my секунда choice: Edward Cullen. So I hauled out all my Twilight Книги and combed through them, analyzing and taking notes. Please leave a Комментарий on my critical analysis telling me what Ты think, what Ты agree on and what Ты disagree on. Please no nasty comments. Enjoy! ~ ~ ~
Okay, number one...one of the reasons Twilight is so dramatic and sometimes just plain depressing is because...
Please no Jacob hate. Thx:) Everything and Nothing-Boom Circuits Lyrics: One еще body left all alone[Jacob is left by Bella] She's made another сердце her home[Bella choosing Edward] Lost between the sea and the sky An Энджел learning how to fly[i think this is how Bella is learning to adjust to her new vampire-self или Jacob learning to cope with the situation]
She floats above our bodies asleep in their graves Dancing in the moonlight glow[i feel like this is Bella once Jacob is dead. Shes like dancing because she is content with her life?]
(I can't have her, save me from her)[repeated throughout song....