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Imagine it in a slower tempo, but don't make it too slow. If Ты don't think it's good let me know what's wrong with it please. What did Ты not like about it. Help me Редактировать it if Ты want to. Thanks :D Don't sugar coat!








Intro
Instrumental


Verse 1

Ты need to say what is on your mind.
I want to see under the words Ты hind behind.
I only view the false you.
All the corruption Ты put my сердце through,
Makes me suffer.
Ты are a сердце crusher


Chorus

Sometimes, I can't see your true intension.
Sometimes, I can't see through your deception.
I can't see if it's your hearts real reflection
If it's your false projection
Filled with your lie's collection
That makes the perfect liar
The perfect cheater
The perfect schemer
The сердце destroyer


Verse 2

It's all the things that Ты do,
It's all the things Ты put me through
It makes me think your words are untrue.
I don’t want to undergo your dishonesty.
I want Ты to say what Ты think openly.
Ты exist to be hurt stretcher.
Ты are a сердце treader.



Chorus

Sometimes, I can't see your true intension.
Sometimes, I can't see through your deception.
I can't see if it's your hearts real reflection
If it's your false projection
Filled with your lie's collection
That makes the perfect liar
The perfect cheater
The perfect schemer
The сердце destroyer


Instrumental


Bridge

Did Ты wear your сердце on your sleeve?
или is that what Ты wanted me to believe?
There are times I can be so blind.
Those are the times Ты mess with my mind.
I want the truth, not your lies,
What do Ты see me as through those eyes?
Ты really are a deceiver.
Ты are a misleader
To make me see the sweater
In the сердце annihilator


Chorus -slow-

Sometimes, I can see your true intension.
Sometimes, I can see through your deception.
I can see that it's your heart’s real reflection.
It’s not your false projection,
You’re filled with your lie's collection,