A poem I wrote about someone I love.

When you’re happy, I’m glad
When you’re depressed, I’m sad
When you’re with her, it doesn’t pain me.
I feel happy that Ты and her are free.
But do Ты Любовь me?
I wonder that while my сердце is breaking.
I smile even though it’s aching.
Will I ever find love?
Will I ever have the freedom, like a dove?
My sadness is consuming my soul, right to the very top
But because you’re happy, the pain will stop.

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It's about a friend of mine who wanted to ask me out, then met a different girl (true story)
brooke9878 posted Больше года
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Ты should have Опубликовано this as an article, not a Вопрос :)
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Too late now :)
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kerikeri said:
aww! sad! :(
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I know right? It sucks...
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no it's not sucks! :)
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melikhan said:
poor u
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As long as he's happy... so am I
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thriller4ever said:
I'm very sad that your hearts broken....but always remember god does everything for our good. maybe god didn't want Ты to be with him...maybe god thought deserve better things and people and maybe there's an awesome guy waiting to meet a wonderful girl like Ты and come into your life....cheer up girl!!
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I'm trying too, but my Друзья also hate him, so it makes me sad again!!!
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see, if the situation is like this : he first liked Ты then dumped Ты for another girl,
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Thanks for the Совет
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johnhetfield666 said:
Thats Kewl Brooke :0 What A Creative Poem
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 Thats Kewl Brooke :0 What A Creative Poem
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Thank Ты
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