I wrote this poem who's devoted to my ex boyfriend i used to love. So,what do Ты think?

Sometimes....
When i look into past,i see you,
i see us...
The way Ты loved me,
the way i loved you,
so pure and strong...
But...
All Ты gave was built on lies,
your Любовь was fake...
So fake while my Любовь was so pure...
And Ты left me nothing but pain
and dreams of us....
Us,but we never existed!
Now,when i look at Ты from a distance,
i think that's the best way i can really see you...
 irena83 posted Больше года
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reneemonique said:
i Любовь it!!:) full of emotion,you can kinda see a picture in your mind of whats going on. your a very good writer:)
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Well,yes,i'm very emotional person,deep and i wrote that straight from my heart...Thanks a lot.
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brokenheart2828 said:
oddly enough, that exactly how me and my ex were...and i hated how it ended...
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Mmh,that's the worst ending. When Ты think that Ты know the person,but actually Ты don't...
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lailalove said:
no wordssssssssss can say how amazing it is it fantasticcccccccccccccccccccccc like i сказал(-а) no wordssssssssss
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Aw thank Ты so much.... <3
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Abilei said:
I think its good. I also think Ты hit everything right on the head for the most part.( =
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Thanks....
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inexplicable said:
It´s a very good poem. Ты are a good poem writer! ;)
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Aw thanks.... ;-)
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_Frida_ said:
that was awesome,I felt the same when it happened to me
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Thanks.....
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Vixie79 said:
Wow, very wavering but the Письмо itself has a loveliness all its own.
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Thank you... <3
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You're welcome. ♥
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