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My latst poem!!!

"My Dearest Love"

Ты came into my life, by neither chance nor fate.
But by destiny, who сказал(-а) for true love, I would no longer wait.
Like an angel, Ты fell from heaven, to Earth below.
Ты came into my life, and set my сердце aglow.
Whenever Ты leave me, and what I say is true.
I lay awake through the night, my сердце crying for you.
Ты are my only desire.
To anyone else, I could never aspire.
Though now Ты are gone, my dearest love,
I find peace, knowing Ты are watching over me from above.
And when, at last, eternity dies.
I rejoice at once again seeing the Любовь in your eyes.
But in this moment, I shan't lose heart.
For not even death can tear our Любовь apart.

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it's beautiful!!!!
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"latest" poem. sorry bout that!!
michaeljsgirl posted Больше года
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its beauitful. i Любовь ur poem
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liberiangirl_mj said:
This is awesome michaeljsgirl!!! thank Ты so much for sharing this with us!!!

"Though now Ты are gone, my dearest love,
I find peace, knowing Ты are watching over me from above.
And when, at last, eternity dies.
I rejoice at once again seeing the Любовь in your eyes.
But in this moment, I shan't lose heart.
For not even death can tear our Любовь apart."

This really makes me cry... I Любовь Ты and I miss Ты so much MJ!!!!!

thanks again for sharing your beautiful poem michaeljsgirl!!
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 This is awesome michaeljsgirl!!! thank Ты so much for sharing this with us!!! "Though now Ты are gone, my dearest love, I find peace, knowing Ты are watching over me from above. And when, at last, eternity dies. I rejoice at once again seeing the Любовь in your eyes. But in this moment, I shan't lose heart. For not even death can tear our Любовь apart." This really makes me cry... I Любовь Ты and I miss Ты so much MJ!!!!! thanks again for sharing your beautiful poem michaeljsgirl!!
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caligurl16 said:
This is beautiful!
I Любовь it! =D
You're a great writer <33
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