What do Ты guys think of it?

This is my book cover that I made for my fanfiction. I'm wondering if Ты guys think it needs to have еще things to fill the white space? (By the way, the notepad thing above Michael's head says "dear dad." Sorry that the picture is so small; Fanpop resized it because it was too big. How are Ты guys enjoying the story so far? Any Избранное parts if Ты had to pick one? L. O. V. E. I have to say that I like Письмо this one a whole lot еще than my first one "daddy's little tomboy." It just seems to flow a lot easier this time around and I like how it's in Michael's point of view now. Do Ты prefer "daddy's little tomboy" или "unconditional love…… A story of fatherhood?" I like being able to start completely from scratch again because I often find myself thinking of things that I could've put in the chapter that I didn't think of before I Опубликовано it! Just a heads up, there will be a whole bunch of plot twists and surprising moments coming up! I'm going a whole different direction with this story and I think you're going to like this one way еще than the Назад one!!! I'm not about to reveal anything secrets though… You'll just have to wait and see what I have up my sleeve!!!!!