ok so heres a sample of the story im Письмо for wattpad:
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first день of school but if my жопа, попка can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 еще минуты before i was about to get up and drag his жопа, попка down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he сказал(-а) with slurred words
"hey dad" i сказал(-а) non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen Ты in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he сказал(-а) as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he сказал(-а) quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i сказал(-а) trying my best to push him away
"give me a Kiss NOW Ты little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to Показать up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he сказал(-а) running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad сказал(-а) taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he сказал(-а) shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a минута i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he сказал(-а) making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are Ты sure your ok ria?" he сказал(-а) with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i сказал(-а) with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' by селезень, дрейк came on and roc instantly started rapping and Пение over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for Музыка to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether или not I should continue или just start over GOOD или BAD? Комментарий pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
Marias POV
Ive been waiting on Chre to come down for yearsssss now.He my brother my very concieted brother I understand its the first день of school but if my жопа, попка can come down on time so can he i mean dude your cute but come on now. I waited for about 5 еще минуты before i was about to get up and drag his жопа, попка down here when my dad came in the door with a bottle in his hand
"hey baby girl" he сказал(-а) with slurred words
"hey dad" i сказал(-а) non chalantly
"come on ihaven't seen Ты in a g-good little while girve your daddy a kiss" he сказал(-а) as he was getting closer and closer to me
"dad your drunk" "come on just one little peck" he сказал(-а) quickly grabbing my hair and pulling backwards so my neck would cock back i could smell the achohol on his breathe
"no dad" i сказал(-а) trying my best to push him away
"give me a Kiss NOW Ты little bitch" he pinned me down i was about to scream when chre FINALLY decided to Показать up
"AYE get the fuck off of her" he сказал(-а) running down the stairs and pushing dad to the floor
"hey theres my boy" dad сказал(-а) taking a sip from the bottle
"tis, the fuck" he сказал(-а) shaking his head "you ok ria go to the car i be there in a минута i gotta help this SORRY EXCUSE FOR A FATHER " he сказал(-а) making sure dad heard the key words i mean when he's actually sober for once he's the best dad ever...but that doesn't happen often. I did as i as told and ran to the car and waited for chre to come out. He finally came out and came to the car "are Ты sure your ok ria?" he сказал(-а) with a sincer apologetic look on his face which instantly made me smile he's one of the only people in this world who TRULY cares about me "yeah im fine" i сказал(-а) with a smile on my face. He smiled and backed out of the drive way, on our way to school 'no new friends' by селезень, дрейк came on and roc instantly started rapping and Пение over it. Hes so talented with really anything that has to do with music. Of course i started rapping with him we both really have a passion for Музыка to be truthful danceing to. We finally pulled up to school we saw chre's boys outside talking so we walked up to them.
OK sooooo this is just part of it and I want your opinion on whether или not I should continue или just start over GOOD или BAD? Комментарий pweaseee pplzzzz it mght be horrible I haven't wrote in like forever but tell meeee BYEEEE
