Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have Ты ever been hurt by the one Ты love
Have Ты ever wanteed to change
Who Ты were, who Ты are, who Ты will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why Ты have the life Ты have
Ты have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt by the one one Ты love
Have Ты ever felt so betrayed
That Ты wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a сердце just by saying "hello"

Have Ты ever though Ты had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have Ты ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way или another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








 MattxAliceNine posted Больше года
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BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write еще poems because Ты are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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