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Please tell me whether this is a good poem или not!

"Best Friends"

There is nothing еще important
Then friendship, Ты know
When Ты have a best friend
Ты learn to go with the flow

With Друзья Ты can be yourself
And never have to lie
Just chat and have fun
There is no need to be shy

So what I tell Ты now
Is what Ты need to know
Let it enter your mind
Любовь and kindness Ты will show.

The people out there,
There are only a few
But once Ты find your best friend
Ты know Ты can be you.

 s-jb123 posted Больше года
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teamalecdemetri said:
i Любовь it.......its REALLY good:)
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Thanks, I was thinking that it was really bad
s-jb123 posted Больше года
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its not bad at all.
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irena83 said:
It's very beautiful poem. ♥
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Thanks, I was doubting it
s-jb123 posted Больше года
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;) You're welcome. Your Письмо is very good.
irena83 posted Больше года
gir5136 said:
It's very good.
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RandomLuver said:
This is an amazing poem truly heartfelt and meaningful. And its true best freinds are a part of you.....
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Yell-0 said:
It is very well written and beautiful.
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LostFan101 said:
Nicee. Sounds like something i'd write. x] Its good :)
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noni4u2004 said:
very nice, awesome dear,its very touchy poem i like it,wish to write like this ,.best of luck.
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annabeth-crazed said:
i think it'd be a cool valentine to give a friend.in fact, can i use it for a valentine?

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and i do really like it!
annabeth-crazed posted Больше года
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Hmm, I guess, I mean it's not like I would know anyway.
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arcticflake said:
Wow I like it the only problem is I like deep dark mysterious poems
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upsidedown10 said:
It is a very cute poem! I really like the meter of it. keep it up!
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animegrl52p said:
I Любовь it! Its great!
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crazy_moose said:
It's a very good poem indeed! I like the message of it and the rhythm rides along very well...

but, I'm not exactly sure if Ты meant to put it like this или not(it could even be just a typo x3) but I think the "then" in the line "Then friendship, Ты know" should be than. Just noticing that it wouldn't really fit well to put "then" there than "than". still, it's just my opinion, i could be wrong x3
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