i need help writting my Манга

i have everything set up really...its just the minor details,like names and stuff.i would like to get your opinion for stuff:
main character: Aki...(last name?)
sub character:Anise...(last name?)
sub character who is their doctor:Sensei...(but what is his real name?)
sub character:Sho...(last name?)
and then we have the story. the story is kinda like bleach(i realized it after i watched it) but thats ok because lots of anime/mangas are like that. there is a hidden community(i need the name of the town too)where only the people who were born there can get in,or if someone who was born there brings Ты there.(i need the name of the fighters who live there.or should i just name them fighters?:/ ) its a whole civilization where most people are regular civilians.then Ты have the "government" (need a name for that too) where there is the king,7 leaders who judge. and lots of lower people in the "government" who do the lower work.(like soldiers или errand men.)
now lets get to the fightrs. each one is granted a power.how they get the power is through a,what regular people,call,"fairies"(need a name for them too)each fairy grants the strong a power. the unstrong will Присоединиться the mass army that fight the neiboring "civilizations"(these civilizations are huge btw and there are 7 of them.each on the major contanants like africa,america,europe,etc.)anyways the "fairies" also give the own his choice of either a ожерелье или a bracelett.each "fighter" needs the neclace или bracelett to Показать he is a fighter and get in to the government offices или "monster"(need a name for that too) areas. the monsters(like bleach) are from dead souls.after a person dies he becomes a soul and that soul evolves the longer it stays in the human world.at first they are really cute,small,fluffy blue creature that is harmless.but then it evolves into a bigger еще dangerous creature.as they evolve they get еще dangerous because they learn how to protect themselves from fighters and other souls.