Well, there is certainly room for improvement. Here are some things that Ты should look into.
- Try practicing around with detail and anatomy. Regardless of style, there are always ground rules for both. One thing Ты can do is look at photographs или even other artwork and really study all the different shapes and forms that are used in artwork and how they flow and balance out one another. Tutorials are also a very nice tool that Ты can use to improve. There is a wonderful man on Youtube with the Имя пользователя markcrilley who does drawing tutorials. He does mostly anime, considering that he's a Манга artist, but his tutorials are very helpful and easy to understand and a wonderful place to start.
- Lighting. Pay very close attention to color gradient and how the light Источник affects the hues in the things we see. The best way to study this is in real life. One thing that helps is to stand in dim lighting, study how Ты and the things around Ты look, and gradually Переместить into and study the same things in different light intensities. Pay close attention to the light Источник and how light hits certain shapes and the form it gives it.
Right now, since your drawing style is fairly simple and a little hard to critique well, I suggest that Ты focus on these things to improve on first. Youtube and deviantART are great places to start at and look for resources to help Ты improve. Don't get discouraged. Remember, practice is the key to everything!
Well... actually balance is.. and numbers... but practice is important, too...
u draw beautifully & im honest u need еще detail &c im honest (because my mom is an art teacher at my school) my mom reviewed it & сказал(-а) u need еще detail for example trees she is making an account called ArtTeacher122