Need help with Письмо

Hi
I really want to be a real writer one day, so any help would be appreciated.

I have Опубликовано some of my stories on other Письмо клубы and received little или no comments.
Now I post most of my stories on a club I made called ITF's stories.

I write mostly about Животные like mice and squirrels that live in a medieval setting (kind of like the Redwall books) but also wild Кошки (like Warriors) and wolves.

Now I post most of my stories on a club I made called ITF's stories.

I would be grateful for any help или Комментарии (good или bad).