Герои Олимпа The House of Hades (my version)

yumalicious posted on Dec 06, 2012 at 06:05AM
WARNING: don't read this if you haven't read the Mark of Athena!

DISCLAIMER: I don't own any of the characters, or anything that has already been written about in PJO or HoO series. They all belong to Mr. Rick Riordan :)

Summary: so far this starts where Percy and Annabeth are falling. Still. I'm not sure how this is going to go yet. So I guess you'll just have to read to find out.


Chapter 1
Percy

Everything was foggy. Percy felt like his ears were stuffed with cotton. He vision was blurry at the edges, but became clearer as it got closer to the center. Was this a dream? He wasn't sure. He couldn't remember anything after finding Annabeth.
In his dream (or whatever it was), he was back in sixth grade. He was in his favorite class, Latin. It was almost over. Mr. Brunner (or rather Chiron) was sitting at the front desk, grading papers, the rest of the class was working on some kind of group project.
Mr. Brunner dismissed the class, and students began to leave. Percy just stood there aimlessly uncertain about what he should do. Mr. Brunner waved his hand, beckoning Percy forward. When Percy got to Mr. Brunner's desk, Mr. Brunner started talking. His voice was muffled, and hard to understand, but Percy could make out "Percy, you will have to try harder, I don't think you understand how this will-". Mr. Brunner stopped, time seemed to be frozen. Then Percy heard a voice, this voice was much higher than Mr. Brunner's, and very urgent. The strange thing was it wasn't muffled. "Percy!" the voice said "Percy wake up!"
Percy's eyes shot open. Everything was black, except for a dim light, though he wasn't sure where it was coming from. He realized he was falling. Annabeth was right next to him. Then everything came flooding back. The tartarus-parking lot, Nico's promise, falling INTO the Tartarus-parking lot, with Annabeth.
"Percy!" Annabeth shouted. "PERCY! I can see the bottom!". Sure enough, still very far away, Percy could see the shiny black rock far below him. It was far away, but they were falling fast, they would soon reach the bottom.
How long had they been falling? Percy had apparently blacked out, so he wasn't sure. He remembered reading Greek myths about a bronze anvil taking nine days to fall from the heavens to the earth, and nine more to get from there to tartarus. Had it really been nine days? he really didn't know.
Now they were, what? A hundred feet away from the bottom. Now seventy-five. Percy had a feeling it was going to be a hard, painful landing. Fifty. How was he going to land? Twenty-five. That's where Percy made a big mistake. He tried to land on his feet.
His first foot hit the hard rock. It was too much. The pain was immediate. He nearly collapsed to the floor, engulfed by it. His whole body felt like it was on fire. He could feel the sweat on his forehead. Percy's ears were ringing. His bones turned to jello-o as he swayed to the side, but caught himself. He tried hard not to black out, but it was too much. The pain was nauseating. He collapsed onto the rock, then it all went black.


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I know I'm not a very good writer, but did you enjoy it? Please leave comments!
and if you have ideas please share! I'd like to try to put them into the story! And I'll need all the help I can get!

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Больше года yumalicious said…
Please don't forget to comment! If nobody comments, I won't continue writing! Thanks for reading!
Больше года teamleo said…
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I must disagree though, u r a good writer. plz post soon and don't worry comments will come. if u want u will post a link to here on my forum. Sorry about what i saod before htought, i misread ur after chapter comment.
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Больше года seaistruth said…
Pleaz post that was good I hope this turns out really good because I've been looking for a really good hoh and I found one but....... Never mind just post, u usually have to post more than a chapter to get a lot of comments
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Thanks so much!!! I try to make it good!! Thanks for reading I'll try to post tomorrow!
Больше года parras2 said…
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it was pretty good post soon
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Turns out I will have time to post today! Yay! Though I don't think I will have time to posteveryday in the future. But anyways... I shall now post!
Больше года yumalicious said…
Chapter 2
Percy

Now they were what? A hundred feet from the bottom. Now seventy-five. Percy had a feeling it was going to be a hard painful landing. Fifty. How was he going to land? Twenty-five. That's where Percy made a big mistake. He tried to land on his feet. His first foot hit the hard rock. It was too much. The pain was immediate. He nearly collapsed to the floor, engulfed by it. His whole body felt like it was on fire.he could feel the sweat on his forehead. Percy's ears were ringing. His bones turned to jell-o as he swayed to the side, but caught himself. He collapsed onto the rock,then it all went black.

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Percy's head was spinning. Little stars dotted his vision. His whole body ached like he had just climbed to the top of mount. Everest without stopping. His right leg was throbbing after he tried land on it. Why had he tried to land on his feet? Why? Slowly the pain in his ankle began to subside, but not enough, it still hurt a whole lot.

Percy tried to sit up, so he could assess the damage. His whole body shook, the stars in his vision were replaced by black dots, that were slowly getting bigger. He felt like he was going to faint. Not from what his leg looked like, but from all the pain he felt, and the effort it took to sit up. From what he could tell (there was only a dim light. And he still wasn't sure where it was coming from), his leg was very swollen, but not broken. How could it not have been broken? Percy wondered. He had been falling at probably terminal velocity, and he was pretty sure that was pretty darn fast.

He looked around him, there was nothing but darkness. He could see- WHERE WAS ANNABETH??? How could Percy have forgotten about her? Where WAS she? "Annabeth! Annabeth!" Percy yelled. "ANNABETH! Where are you?". He began to panick, then he heard her voice. "Percy! Percy, help me!" the voice came from behind him. He tried to stand, but he immediately fell back. Annabeth was in trouble, he had to help her. He got up. He nearly fell over again, but he managed to stay standing. He could hear his heart pounding, the black dots in his vision began to grow bigger. It hurt so much just to stand. He turned around to face where her voice had come from. "Annabeth!" he called out. Then to his right, she yelled "Percy! I'm over here! Help!" then a few seconds her voice came from his left "Percy! Help!" what was going on? Then behind him, a low gravely voice spoke "We've heard so much about you Perseus Jackson.". Percy whirled around. "who's there?" he shouted, as confidently as he could. Then out of the dark, on all sides of him, four Cyclopes stepped out. The one in the middle had was holding Annabeth. She was gagged, and unconscience, there was a big lump on her forehead. He uncapped Riptide, and slashed his sword through the Cyclopes to the right. As soon as he dissolved, he reformed. It had only taken him a few seconds. The Cyclopes just laughed cruelly. The one holding Annabeth looked amused. "foolish demigod!" he bellowed. "you cannot kill us! We are already in Tartarus! Now you will come with us! We have not eaten well in years!". Percy raised his sword, though he knew he couldn't fight them. The Cyclops behind him raised his club. But before Percy could react, THUMP! Percy's head throbbed with pain, then he collapsed, everything black.

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I know, Percy passed out twice! Your probably like seriously!! No more passing out for a while! I promise!
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Больше года teamleo said…
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awesome chapter!!!!!!!Thnx for posting post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Thanks teamleo!!! Same goes to you
Больше года seaistruth said…
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That was amazingful I real so smart cuz when u wrote "Annabeth's" cry I'm like cyclops........ And there's like a cyclops and I'm just sitting there like oh yea who's the genius now Einstein????? Yay so that was really good post soon yay!
Больше года yumalicious said…
Seaistruth, WOW!! that's is so nice of you!!! :) dont know if all the chapters will be that way :( but I will try!
Teamleo, thanks for all the support!

What you guys have said and done really means a lot! :)
Thanks to everyone who's reading :D
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Chapter 3
Nico

The six demigods (and of course, coach hedge) were gathered on the deck of the Argo 2. They were supposed to be having a meeting, for what they were going to do next, and where they were going to go. Everyone was silent, it was like they were mourning the supposed loss of Percy and Annabeth. Though, out of all of them, Leo looked the worst. Nico could tell just by looking at him, how guilty Leo felt.

Finally, Jason broke the silence. "So, Nico, where exactly are the doors of death?". "Well I know they're in Greece...but I'm not really sure where yet." Nico said. When Nico saw how uneasy the response made them he knew he had to fix it. "But once we're in Greece, I should be able to locate them." he said. That seemed to reassure them a bit, Nico thought. "So I guess we're headed to Greece!"Jason announced, with forced enthusiasm. "I guess we'd better start crossing the ocean.". Everyone nodded in agreement, except Leo. He just stared off into the horizon. The poor guy blamed himself for what had happened to Percy, and Annabeth. Though it really wasn't his fault, it really wasn't anybodys'.

After a few long minutes of silence, Piper spoke up. "Leo," she said gently, "Leo, can you take us to Greece?" "Sure thing" Leo muttered. He pressed a few buttons in the control panel, then he shook his wii remote half-heartedly. The Argo 2 took a right, as the headed east, towards the Adriatic sea, and away from the setting sun.

Everybody except for Nico, and Leo had gone down below to rest. Nico didn't have a room to stay in, so he just paced up and down the deck. Leo sat at the control panel, monitoring the ship. Generally Nico wasn't a sympathetic type of person, but he seriously felt bad for Leo. He walked over to where Leo was sitting, and began to talk. "What happened back in Rome, it wasn't your fault.". It felt weird trying to comfort someone, especially when that someone happened to be older than him, but he continued. "They're not dead. They'll be fine. Like I said, if anybody can survive Tartarus, it's them.". "Thanks man." Leo said, though he didn't seem much better.

Nico went down to explore the Argo 2 a bit. He found some blankets, and a big comfy purple chair. When he sat down, he realized how tired he was. It had been a very long day, full of lots of commotion. As soon as he hit the purple chair, he passed out.

His dream was a standard demigod dream. He was in a dark prison cell, made of shiny black rock. It was one of those prison cells, like in old movies, where it was closed in on all sides, except for the front, where there was only bars. The bars were made of celestial bronze. The only source of light came from outside the cell, it was green, Greek fire torches hung from the walls. In the corner of the cell, Percy was curled up in a ball. He was quite pale, and he looked terrified. Nico had never seen Percy like that. Across the aisle, a few cells down, he could see Annabeth, she didn't look much better. At least they were alive.

Nico slipped out of the dream, and he woke up. Only to hear a bell ringing, the sound came from the deck. It was early in the morning, maybe 4 or 5, so whatever it was it must have been important.

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Could I have 3 different comments, from 3 different people? Please comment! And don't forget suggestions! Thanks again for reading!
Больше года teamleo said…
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Umm...seriously,u r a really great person! No joke. And i would like to officially apoligize for my first comment. i thought u wrote "i know i am a very good writer,but did u enjoy it and all i could say was like someone's cocky, but that's not what u wrote so sorry. Also Great chapter
Больше года seaistruth said…
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That was good r u going to keep Percy and Annabeth in a cage for the whole story cuz that could be good or bad....*thinking face* for a suggestion maybe do a Leo pov or Annabeth knows a way out and is trying to form a plan
Больше года yumalicious said…
Teamleo, your forgiven, even though you really dont need to apologize for anything. Its really fine! :)
Seaistruth, I wasn't planning on keeping them in a cage the whol time. And I will do a pov for Leo and Annabeth, and maybe piper.

Thanks for the comments! :D
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Больше года Blue_Waves said…
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Wow..... That was wow!! I loved it! Hey just a suggestion u should make their prisons underground and Percy being all scared and Annabeth sees Percy's fear of suffocation just a suggestion but keep posting this forum is awesome!!!!
Больше года seaistruth said…
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Hey a started a forum called The Quest With a Mark please check it out :) and post soon please
Больше года yumalicious said…
Thanks for the comments!
Teamleo, it's fine, you don't have to apologize! :D
Blue_waves, I like your suggestion I will try to put it in when I get to Percy's pov.
Seaistruth, I love your forum!
Thanks for reading!
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Chapter 4
Leo

*this takes place after Nico tries to comfort Leo*

Leo had a lot to be happy about. He had found the Archimedes spheres, AND the scrolls. They'd rescued the Athena Parthenos. And the Argo 2 was still in one piece. But Leo felt horrible. How could he have let Percy and Annabeth fall to their likely deaths? They had to be alive. He had to save them. Nico said they were alive. And even though he didn't want to, he had to trust Nico.

Everyone was down, in their rooms, probably sleeping, after such a long day. The moonlight made the sea below them glow. Leo was so exhausted, he set the Argo 2 to autopilot. According to Festus, they should reach Albania by late afternoon, tomorrow. Then, they would reach Greece by the next morning. Once Leo got to his room, he collapsed from exhaustion.

In his dream he was on a mountain. He couldn't tell how high it was, because of all the fog below him. All around him he could see other snow capped mountains. Though this one seemed to be the tallest. About a hundred feet away, he could see a light coming from a cave. He wondered who it was. As if on cue, he started to move towards the cave.

The cave was more like a home. At the back there was a fire place. It was a one room cave, lit by candles. In one corner there was a bed blocked off by curtains, in the other corner there was a table, with a cornucopia overflowing with fruit, and a vase of flowers. There were even a few chairs. Next to that, there was a basin filled with water. At the fire place, in a chair, sat a young woman, poking the fire. She looked like she was in her early twenties, though Leo guessed she wasn't just a mortal, so she was probably thousands of years older than that. She had long brown hair, and blue eyes, she wore a pale blue dress, and a shaw. She turned to Leo and began to talk to him as if she knew he was there. "Young demigod, I know what you are hoping for." Leo realized she knew he was there. "You hope your friends are still alive, and you hope to save them." How DID she know? "If you come I can help you save them. But you must hurry." But before she could finish, the dream faded, and Leo woke up.

If that lady could help them rescue Percy and Annabeth, then he was going to find her. Leo had to tell the others, so they could help him locate her. It was about five in the morning, but he didn't care. He ran up to the deck, and began to ring the emergency bell.

A few moments later, he heard foots steps running up the stairs. Everybody was standing on deck, in their pajamas glaring at Leo. "Leo, is this some sort of joke?" Jason asked. "No," Leo said. "I've figured out a way to save Percy and Annabeth." that seemed to wake them up a bit. Leo explained his dream, and when he was done, everyone was silent. "Lots of mountains " Hazel said. "And snow." Frank said. "Maybe the alps." Nico said. Everyone nodded in agreement. "So I guess we're going to Switzerland now." Piper said. "Sounds about right to me.'" Jason said. Once again everybody nodded in agreement. "Okay, Valdez." coach Hedge started. "Let's get going." Leo changed the direction of the ship to north. At this rate they should be there in about two days. Now that Leo felt like they had a shot at saving them, he felt a lot better. They were officially one step closer to Saving Percy and Annabeth.
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Больше года parras2 said…
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awesome chapter
Больше года Blue_Waves said…
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Post soon!!! :)
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Can I have 5 comments from different peopl? Ill count parras2's and blue_waves! Thanks everyone!
3 more!!! :)
Больше года teamleo said…
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ohhh i am so sorry i was gonna post a comment but my computer shut down. Great Chapter! I LUV THIS STORY!!!!!!!
Больше года seaistruth said…
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Great post! Got 2 luv anything that involves Leo
Больше года teamleo said…
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Thats so true!
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Just need one more person to comment! Thanks for commenting!
Больше года teamleo said…
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Thanks for writing!
Больше года yumalicious said…
Only 4 different people commented, but whatever. I really want to post, so I will. Thank you to those who did (parras2, blue_waves, teamleo, seaistruth)! Enjoy!
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Chapter 5
Piper

DING! DING! DING! Piper slowly began to wake, just opening one eye at a time.she heard foot steps running down the hall, and up the stairs, was it morning already? She sat in her bed, with a blanket wrapped around her shoulders, her room was so cozy and warm, she didn't want to leave. Then Piper realized that the reason the she was awake was because she heard the EMERGENCY bell, so there must be and EMERGENCY. She got up and pushed the door open l nearly missing Jason.

"What's going on?" she asked

"I don't know. But it must be important, so let's get to the deck." Jason replied.

On deck, she saw everybody glaring at Leo. He had one of his signature, crazy-Leo-idea smiles on. For a guy who had just been super depressed, she wondered what had changed his mood so quickly. Like within a few hours quickly. Maybe he had been possessed by another Eidolon, a very daranged, happy Eidolon.

"Leo, is this some sort of joke?" Jason asked.

"No," Leo said, "I've figured out a way to save Percy and Annabeth."

That lightened Piper up a bit. Even though she barely knew either of them, she felt terrible about what had happened. And she wanted to do anything she could to save them. This whole quest, Piper felt like she hadn't helped at all. She was just a nuissance.

Leo explained his dream, about the mysterious lady in the cave, and all the mountains, and how she said she could help them save Percy and Annabeth. Everybody was thinking. Where could the mysterious lady be? Finally, Hazel spoke up,

"Lots of mountains." she wondered out loud.

"And snow." Frank added.

"Maybe the alps." Nico said.

Everyone nodded, like they had come to a silent agreement.

"So we're going to Switzerland." Piper said.

Jason replied, "Sounds sounds about right to me."

Soon Leo turned the ship north, and everyone left to get dressed. Soon only she, Jason, and Leo were left. Then suddenly Piper had an idea. She turned to Jason.

"I haven't looked in katroptris (sorry idk how to spell that, I just guessed) in a while, do you think it might" show us something about this mysterious lady. Maybe what mountain she lives on." Piper began.

"I don't know," Jason replied, "it might. I guess it's worth a try."

Piper ran back to her room, and brought katroptris back up. She and Jason looked into the bronze reflection, for a while, they only saw themselves. Then the image began to swirl, and it changed.

They were in a cozy little house-like cave. A young woman sat in a chair by the fire. She looked exactly how Leo had described her. Suddenly the image began to zoom out, and out, until they were standing, about a mile away from the mountain. Somehow, Piper recognized the mountain immediately. She guessed Jason did too because he gasped. It was the mont. Blanc, the tallest mountain in the alps. Then the image swirled back to their reflections.

"Leo," she called, "we're headed to mont. Blanc, set the ship's course for France!"




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Больше года teamleo said…
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OMG!!!!!!!!! Thank you for posting!!!! PLZ POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! New Page!! CAKE 4VERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( take notes yummalicious, new page equals cake, fanpop custom XD)
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Больше года yumalicious said…
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Thanks teamleo! Here's some cake! Hurray for fanpop customs!!!! :D
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Больше года seaistruth said…
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WOW!!!!!!!! Soooooo goooood!!!!! U posted!!!!!! Yay!
Больше года Blue_Waves said…
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oooh theyre lucky! i wanna go to France!!!! course without the danger.....or sadness of losing friends....or Dirt Face hahaha good story keep posting!!!!!!!!!!!
Больше года yumalicious said…
I'm going to post now! Thanks everyone! Don't forget to leave a comment! :D
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Then out of the dark, on all sides of him, four Cyclopes stepped out. The one in the middle had was holding Annabeth. She was gagged, and unconscience, there was a big lump on her forehead. He uncapped Riptide, and slashed his sword through the Cyclopes to the right. As soon as he dissolved, he reformed. It had only taken him a few seconds. The Cyclopes just laughed cruelly. The one holding Annabeth looked amused. "foolish demigod!" he bellowed. "you cannot kill us! We are already in Tartarus! Now you will come with us! We have not eaten well in years!". Percy raised his sword, though he knew he couldn't fight them. The Cyclops behind him raised his club. But before Percy could react, THUMP! Percy's head throbbed with pain, then he collapsed, everything black.
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Chapter 6
Annabeth

Annabeth sat propped up agaisnt a cavern wall. Her hands were tied behind her back, and her ankles were tied together. Even her mouth was gagged. Her whole body ached. Annabeth felt like all her bones had been taken out, and replaced by rubber ones. Her head throbbed from the blow with the Cyclops club.

She could see Percy next to her. He had his arms and legs tied up, and his mouth was gagged too, even though he was still unconscious. From the other side she heard one of e Cyclopes voices,

"Welcome demigods to our prison, Tartarus!"

As soon as he said that, a huge fire pit (she figured was about fifteen feet in diameter), about ten feet away from Annabeth, exploded with Greek fire. It reminded her of an olympic torch. The heat was intense, she screamed, which came out muffled. The whole cavern lit up. She could see the ceiling sixty feet above, was coated with sharp stalactites, that could easily impale you. The cavern was about the size of a football field,so that would make the fire pit about the same place as the goalpost.

Finally Percy woke up. He looked terrified. He squirmed, and kicked, and made muffled sounds. But he just couldn't break free. Annabeth had never seen Percy act like that before. He was panicky, his eyes were wide. It was clear he didn't want to be there. She had to figure a way to escape before Percy went insane. She searched herself for something to cut the ropes- or anything. Percy thrashed around. There had to be SOMETHING.

"Looking for these?", one of the Cyclopes said, holding up her dagger, her backpack and laptop, and Percy's sword (in pen form). He dumped them on the ground right next to the fire.

Percy rolled around on the ground, screaming through the cloth over his mouth. He really was going insane.

"If you don't behave, demigods, I'll throw all your little precious possessions into the fire." the Cyclops laughed.

That seemed to calm Percy a bit, but his eyes were still wide, and his breathing was heavy.

"Tonight," another Cyclops bellowed, "we shall feast like never before!"

All four Cyclopes laughed, it shook the cavern walls. Percy screamed and rolled around like crazy. Annabeth could only watch.

"Stop right there!" a very familiar voice yelled, "Those two demigods are the chosen sacrafices of Gaea herself!"

The Cyclopes seemed to know who it was because they cowered in fear. Suddenly Kampê came out and shouted,

"These are my prisoners now! I shall take them to mount. Olympus, where their blood shall awaken Gaea!"

Percy thrashed even more. With that she untied Anbabeth, and Percy's feet.

"Walk." she commanded, poking the tip of her spear into Annabeth's back.

Annabeth began to walk, with Percy right next to her. Wherever there were going, she knew they were staying together.

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Больше года Blue_Waves said…
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!! MORE POST SOON!!!!! CAKE FOR YOU!!!!!
Больше года seaistruth said…
Awsomeful post soon
Больше года teamleo said…
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IT WAS REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would just like to say good job on the part with Kampe.It was short but not rushed. Well done, Young Grasshopper. XDAnways keep up the good work!
Больше года yumalicious said…
I don't know if I will have time to post tomorrow, but I will try. So I know I say this all the time, but THANKS EVERYONE!!!!! XP
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Chapter 7
Percy

Kampê poked him in the back with her spear,

"Keep moving!" she ordered.

His whole body shook. This place made him want to climb into a ball, and stay like that for all of eternity. He had never felt that way before. Percy wondered if he was going to go insane. Maybe this was some kind of Magic effect Tartarus had in people. He wondered of he already WAS insane. He shook even more. Percy looked to Annabeth for reassurance, she was calm, though her face was grim.

The only light came from Kampê torch, lit with Greek fire. It gave the tunnel they were walking down an even scarier appearance- if that was possible. All around Percy, warm light shone. It was very small, and dim. Like he was holding a small candle. This whole place reminded him of the labyrinth. The only thing he knew, was their final destination, mount Olympus. Where he and Annabeth would be used as sacrafices to wake Gaea.

Finally the tunnel led into a room about the size of a gymnasium, with old prison cells on every side. Percy could see the tunnel continued on the other side. Greek fire torches lined the walls. The room smelled like, things Percy didn't want to describe.

"We shall stay here for the night, and continue in the morning." Kampê announced.

She locked Percy in one cell, and Annabeth in another, several cells down. Percy huddled in the corner, he really was terrified. But he just had to get out. It was too much. He ran up to the celestial bronze bars, and rattled them like crazy.

"Let me out!" he shouted, "LET ME OUT!"

"just what do you think you are doing?" Kampê shouted, "Behave or else!" she snarled, holding the point of her spear at his neck.

Percy, terrified backed into the corner, and curled in a ball. How WAS he going to get out this time?
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2. say your mom's name five times.
.........3. say your crushes three times.
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...If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday.
......But if you read this and do not paste this, then you
will have very bad luck.
SEND THIS TO 5 GROUPS IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOU'RE DONE PRESS F6 AND YOUR CHRUSH'S NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS ON THE SCREEN. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS (idk about this but i am up for the challenge XD)
Больше года teamleo said…
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DUDE , you and your story are amazingful! Keep going you are doing a great job! Hope you can post tomorrow!
Больше года seaistruth said…
Really great!!! Percy is really like messed up right now though.
Больше года yumalicious said…
Sorry I couldn't post yesterday! I was really busy! But I will post now! Yay!!!
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Chapter 8
Annabeth

"UP! GET UP!" Kampê yelled.

She was hitting her spear against the bars of the cell. BANG! BANG! BANG! While Annabeth was sleeping, she had forgotten where she was. She wished she was still sleeping. She sat up, her back was so stiff from sleeping on the ground.

"Com here girl!" Kampê ordered through the bars.

Annabeth wasn't in the mood to become a demigod shishcabob, so she came forward.

"Turn around!" Kampê ordered again.

Annabeth was afraid Kampê was going to run her right through with her spear, but Annabeth turned around reluctantly. Kampê tied her hands behind her back, the she unlocked the cage door.

"Let's move it, girl!" Kampê shouted, poking Annabeth in the back with her spear.

Kampê steered Annabeth over To where Percy's cell was. He was huddled in the corner shaking. She'd never seen Percy like that before. It was so strange. She wanted to call out to him, and comfort him, but she didn't think Kampê would like that.

"Come here boy!" Kampê said.

Hesitantly, Percy advanced towards Kampê, where he turned around so she coul tie up his hands, just like she had done to Annabeth. Then once Kampê let Percy out, they began walking to the other side of the jail.

Tartarus basically WAS a labyrinth. It had twists, and turns, and dead ends, and other tunnels connecting to millions of other tunnels. Fortunatley (or maybe unfortunately) Kampê seemed to have memorized it. Kampê led the way, with her Greek fire torch, which didn't provide much light. Then there was the invisible candle, that seemed to follow Annabeth. She wondered if Percy could see it too.

Up ahead she heard what sounded like water, a river. Percy must have sensed it too, because he began to shake more.

Kampê muttered something like, "Almost there. Just a few days, almost there."

Almost where? Annabeth thought, as the sound of rushing water got even louder. Almost where?
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Sorry it's kind of short, but I have to go. I will post tomorrow! Thanks!
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Today in Connecticut, 26 innocent people were killed! They were teachers and children! Violence is truely terrible! This makes you realize just how fortunate we are, so tonight, don't forget to pray for them and their families. And for those of you who believe in heaven, they're there, they really deserve to be.
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Im sorry, I did not have a picture to put here
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mechdemigod commented…
lets have a moment of silence Больше года
Больше года rainbow_girl said…
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I am new to this forum, and i have to say that this is one of the best hoh ive ever read.
POST SOON!!!!
Больше года teamleo said…
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Thanks for posting! Plz post soon and stay safe!
Больше года yumalicious said…
Hi everyone, thanks o much for reading! Could I please have sone suggestions? That would really help! Any suggestion (well it can't be too strange, it has to at least sorta go with the story)! Thanks!
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Chapter 9
Nico

The sun told him it was about seven or eight in the morning. Suddenly, Leo's voice came on the speaker,

"Hey everyone, this is the um... Supreme Commander of the Argo 2 speaking. Our current destination is Mont Blanc, France! We will be arriving in a couple days. So, uh, yeah! Oh and thank you for flying air Leo!"

At least Leo was normal again.

Nico looked down, far below the Argo 2, he saw the sea. It reminded him of Percy. He wondered how Percy and Annabeth were doing. Nico was too far away to tell.
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It was dinner, but Nico wasn't very hungry. He stood on the deck, staring at the setting sun, when right behind him, he heard, CLOMO, CLOMP, CLOMP! Then CRASH! Nico whirled around, sword in hand. Oh, but it was just Arion. But Arion looked nervous. He trotted around the deck, like he was being chased. Nico could see the whites if his eyes. Nico backed up, not wanting to be trampled.

"Hazel, Arion is here, but I think something's wrong with him!" he shouted

Just moments later, all the demigods came running up the stairs, Hazel was leading.

"Arion!" Hazel shouted, "Arion calm down!"

But Arion wouldn't. Suddenly, to their left, they heard nervous whinnying. It was Blackjack and Tempest, they looked nervous too. They flew around the ship, unyil they landed on the deck, and all the horses ran around, again, like they were being chased. And things only got weirder, and of course, worse.

Tempest sent an electric current through the dubstep soundboard. Leo looked like he wanted to scream. It turned into radio mode, and started playing We No Speak Americano. That tipped the Leo scale, because he shouted,

"OH MY GOSH, I HATE THIS SONG! STUPID ITALIANS, DON'T YOU KNOW, NOBODY LISTENS TO THIS!!!"

Tempest didn't seem satisfied either, because he electrocuted the siundboard again. This time it played Gangnam style.

"GANGNAM STYLE!" Frank and Jason yelled in unison, as their eyes glazed over.

Everyone turned around to see why they yelled. Then Jason and Frank fell over on their faces. Meanwhile, Blackjack had the wii remote in his mouth, he but it in half. A huge disco ball popped out of the ground, it rose fifteen feet in the air, then it blew confetti everywhere. A banner popped out that read PHSYCO HORSE-CREATURE ALERT! The disco ball began spinning, changing different colors. Arion had gotten a hold of some magic plates, and goblets, he was smashing them one by one.

"NO!" Leo shrieked.

Jason and Frank got up, and began to dance, Gangnam Style. They danced behind the horses, which scared them (the horses), like Jason and Frank were chasing them. Suddenly the door burst open, Coach Hedge appeared, he was very angry. Everyone backed away from him.

"WHY ARE YOU CUPCAKES HAVING A PARTY WITHOUT ME?!" he shouted

He ran over to the dubstep soundboard, and changed it to Party
Rock Anthem. He started shuffling over to Jason and Frank. They were still dancing Gangnam style. The coach wrapped his arms around their shoulders, and he began to do the Can Can.

Nico thought about all the Greek myths he had ever read. Then one came to his mind. It was about the Taraxippus, phantoms that scared horses (or in their case horse-creatures).

"Guys," Nico said, "I have a plan!"
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Yeah, that was a pretty weird chapter! XP
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mechdemigod commented…
funniest thing i ever read Больше года
Больше года Blue_Waves said…
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Ohh!! U should have that lady in Leo's dream be Hestia (is that the correct spelling??) and have the demigods have dreams of hints on how to save Percy and Annabeth that's my suggestion
Больше года teamleo said…
cool
I think you should have the lady in Leo's dream give them a prophecy to help them find Percy and annabeth and then everyone gets ticked caus they have a new puzzle to solve
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Whoa! That was a long chapter! If you're looking for chapter 9, I just edited the preview
Больше года seaistruth said…
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Awsome ! That was sooo crazy I love it
Больше года rainbow_girl said…
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YAY!! U POSTED!!!
that was amazing! POST SOOOOOOON!!!!!!!
Больше года yumalicious said…
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Thanks! I will post tomorrow night!
Больше года yumalicious said…
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I claim the 50th comment! Woohoo! I will be posting now, so get ready! Yay!