Help!!!!! I don't know where to change it или keep it all the same!?!?!?!

Ok I'm Письмо this book of mine but half my hearts in it! I mean I like having my readers backed with curiosity when I become all business, I'm feeling that I've nearly sucked all the mysterious out of it, and I haven't gotten to Chapter Three. Although it's where I reveal a lot and even though there is still so much еще to come I feel like I should make my readers wait make the curiosity build yet one part wants me change and rethink the organized plan I'm going with while other half wants me to leave it exactly the way it is. Any Совет guys?!?!?!?!?!?!
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dragonsmemory said:
If Ты want my advice, here it is: You're overthinking the book. You're planning too far ahead in the story. This drastically increases the chance of early spoilers. Butdon't worry. There is a way to salvage your book. First, Ты need to throw out all your plans for the storyline. Keep anything that doesn't pose a spoiler risk. After that, firmly plant the original vision of the book in your mind. From there, the book should practically write itself.
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alicia386 said:
I had the same problem. Two years ago, I was Письмо a book called Зачарованные and Dangerous. I thought everything was wrong and I added too much stuff and I ruined the ending. I threw the book idea out. Looking back on it now I realized nothing was wrong with it, I was trying too hard and didn't relax about it. And here it is today, the original version.

U r over thinking it. U need to take a breathe and do half. Add some spoilers but then have еще Вопросы popp to the point where there are spoilers but Ты haven't spoiled the ending, Ты are just keeping the reader interested, the еще Вопросы and secrets go Без ответа the еще they will read. Spoilers are interesting, don't get rid if them all. But if u feel that it is good then don't changer but if your сердце is half way in it then something needs to be done.
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