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hi guys just being really Храбрая сердцем here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired by twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i Любовь Письмо and i want to improve it thx :

Любовь is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

Ты can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let Любовь go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

Любовь is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
Любовь is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

Любовь is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
еще then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
Любовь finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes Любовь burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
Любовь is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe Ты don’t Любовь the one who loves you,
But even if your сердце is full of hate
Любовь comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

Любовь can bring back life to those
Who have Остаться в живых meaning and hope
So I belive Любовь is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

Любовь is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
Любовь is something Ты can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
Любовь is how Ты sooth
Любовь is calm but also wild,
Музыка that makes Ты move

Peaceful is what Любовь is,
a flutter in the air
Любовь is sometimes peaceful
Любовь isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
Любовь never stops growing
we don’t know how big Любовь grows.


Любовь is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for Чтение it
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
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ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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thx!! that means alot
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) LOL
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Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
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countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . Ты have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD LOL thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
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ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at Письмо them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
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twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like Письмо n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
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loverofedward said:
Эй, there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair или maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant by it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! LOL thx tho
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