I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every минута with her is a минута to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her Переместить and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions Переместить me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that Ты know me so well?
Sometimes it seems Ты can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, by design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every минута with her is a минута to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her Переместить and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions Переместить me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that Ты know me so well?
Sometimes it seems Ты can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, by design.
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward или jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she сказал(-а) when edward asked her,
" are Ты sure Ты made the right choice, i have never seen Ты in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she сказал(-а) when edward asked her,
" are Ты sure Ты made the right choice, i have never seen Ты in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
