I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every минута with her is a минута to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her Переместить and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions Переместить me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that Ты know me so well?
Sometimes it seems Ты can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, by design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every минута with her is a минута to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her Переместить and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions Переместить me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that Ты know me so well?
Sometimes it seems Ты can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, by design.
!!!!!!ATTENTION ALL TWILIGHT FANS!!!!!!
If Ты are a MAJOR или just a Фан of Stephanie Meyer's most Популярное Twilight Saga then pay attention.
On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to Опубликовать Midnight Sun.If Ты have read her draft of Midnight Sun или even if Ты haven't then Ты can right how Ты think it should be.She wants to see what her Фаны (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and Показать evryone what we're capable of.
-twilight_unite-(MAJOR Фан OF TWILIGHT SAGA)
If Ты are a MAJOR или just a Фан of Stephanie Meyer's most Популярное Twilight Saga then pay attention.
On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to Опубликовать Midnight Sun.If Ты have read her draft of Midnight Sun или even if Ты haven't then Ты can right how Ты think it should be.She wants to see what her Фаны (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and Показать evryone what we're capable of.
-twilight_unite-(MAJOR Фан OF TWILIGHT SAGA)