Tell me what Ты think PLEASE!

So i was thinking about Письмо a story.
It's about a boy, who has no one except a 12 год old sister there for him, but he misses his ex-gf and brother, who was his best friend his whole life. His life is kinda f*cked up, he's on drugs, alcohol, stealing and all that stuff. Until he meets a girl, who changes his life. He finally sees things the way they used to be, happy, bright.
But then a tragic огонь comes, threatening to глотать, ласточка the girl into the flames. The boy must risk his life to save her. Will he do it? Will he succeed?
And it goes on, but i would tell Ты the story, so there wouldn't be any point in Чтение it :)
So, the names and stuff:
Simon Cogsworth -
the main character
Jacob Cogsworth -
Simon's brother - died (you would find the reason in the story)
Адель Cogsworth -
Simon's baby sister, 12yrs old, tries to stop Simon from screwing up his life.
Kally,Charles Cogsworth -
Simon's parents (died in a car accident caused by Charles, who was drunk)
Lily Purnell -
the girl who helps Simon get his life back on tracks.
Henry Purnell -
Lily's brother
Alexis Atkinson -
Simon's ex-girlfriend, killed by a drunk driver (you probably already have a clue who it is... )

... so, what do Ты think? Should i write it?
P.S. Sorry, if i have any mistakes, my Главная language isn't English... :)
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CHAPTER 1 READY!!! I'm nervous ... maybe none of Ты like it :(:(?
Liisamyts posted Больше года
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link to it: link
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Jackbs Story
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Aquamarina said:
Yes, it sounds quite interesting! Have Ты already written it? If not, just do it!
Simon´s ex-girlfriend was killed by the car of his parents, right?:)
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I haven't written it yet :( Письмо it right now, but i have ideas for the whole story :)
Liisamyts posted Больше года
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thank Ты so much :) and yes, it was his parents car that got her killed, he knows it and hates his father for that. :)
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I understand :) Btw, which country are Ты from?
Aquamarina posted Больше года
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from Estonia :)
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sahour95 said:
Oh! That sounds very interestiing!! Can Ты please tell me when Ты write the first chapter?? I so wanna read it !
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i'm not sure yet :):) I'll let Ты know ASAP :) That makes me happy :) It means so much to me ! :)
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I like when ppl support me! so I'm sure everyone likes it too :DD
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:):)
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AkitoSouma said:
Go for it! The plot sounds really interesting. And even if that story doesn't turn out to be everything Ты want it to be it may give Ты inspiration for another. ^^ Whenever Ты feel inspired for a story Ты should write it, because there's probably a very good reason it occurred to you.
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thanks:) it means a lot, um, there's no specific reason for it, it kinda... just -- came to me.. Ты know what i mean? i don't know, i wanted to write something, i thought of a boy, sad, and then it came :)
Liisamyts posted Больше года
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Oh, I understand exactly what Ты mean. When there seems to be no rhyme или reason to it those turn out to be the absolute best stories. :)
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XDRoseLuvsHP said:
Wow, that actually sounds really good! I'd totally read it :)
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