What do Ты think?

Okay, so this is a poem I wrote for my short story Love Poems, coming to FictionPress ASAP. I just need some opinions...

It's like I've known you
In another life
We work well together
That, no one can deny

We've been Друзья for a while
But it feels like longer
Each день our relationship
Grows a little stronger

Passersby watch, and
Think we're a couple
Our Друзья would agree
Just make it quintuple

Which is why I'm voicing
The Популярное thought
Something should be done
A change sould be sought

So will Ты do it?
Be my change-seeker
It needn't be much
Just a small gesture
Of love
 lucius_malloy posted Больше года
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Gypsi_Rose said:
aw it's beautiful :) - Ты are a great writer/poet! :)
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posted Больше года 
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thanks :) Ты literally just made my день :)
lucius_malloy posted Больше года
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