can someone please read this and give me their opinion im almost finished

Something has severely struck my curiosity
Did he know of his ill fate?
What were his last thoughts?
Did he even have any?
If so were they about his family?
If his life flashed before his very eyes,
Did he have any regrets about what he saw?
What were his last words?
So many Вопросы about this stranger dying before my very eyes ,
whom I know absolutely nothing about.
The touchiest of subjects and its stuck on my mind
Truthfully, the only people who know the answer
are forever gone.
When time comes for me to know the answer
What will I be thinking about?
Will I know of what is to come of me?
Who will I think about?
What will my last words be and who will they be to?
And when my very life flashes before my eyes,
Will I regret what I see?
It’s amazing how life is full of surprises,
One минута you’re living life up
And the very Далее your gone in an instant. POOF!
Once someone is gone they are gone forever.
Ты can never talk to them again no matter how badly
Ты want to. And to hear old recordings or, see pictures of
them is priceless. Whenever I think about death a million
Вопросы come to my mind. I do not fear my own death,
but I fear the death of my loved ones, because living life
without them would be unbearable. I find it hard to
put all of my thoughts down as I type,
for I only have Вопросы with no answers.
Today I witnessed a man die,
And for the first time I began to think about what people
Are thinking as they’re dying. Since it is impossible to know the answer I guess I’ll never know.

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Hinata-Snow said:
I liked it. It flowed pretty smoothly. And it's true. Gone is gone.
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thanks
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writer67 said:
wow.good.many would upon learning of death of inevibility,wish they had еще ime to do just a few еще things.and what they could или should have done differentl, and of who will remember them and say a good word или two about them.i tret every день as if its my last,and i will leave something behind,for others to know of my thoughts in written form,i have had life flash before my eyes before, and i woke up to reliasation,i am just a speck like an ant from above,my life will be an attempt to be like the greats, mj over 150 songs , elvis Фильмы and music,other greats have over 150 things for others after they have passed, to Показать their life would will count,as each life is blessed, by God. Ты do have many questions, hope Ты are doing something different every day, youve started, by writing, good on ya;-]
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thank you! im finally finished it Ты want to read the rest
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joe-edwardfan said:
wow, i really liked it!
i kinda think the same way u do in ur article.....i just get attached to ppl toooo easily:(
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thanks and getting attached is never a bad thing, losing someone is whats horrible. but some of us are very lucky and healthy
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true....true...:)
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Claudia4599 said:
I Любовь it. u r really good!
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