What Ты think about poetrys?

I'm not sure, would peoples like my poetrys, if I could try ^^ Here is one;

"When we were young, and foolish too,
we made a promise under the stars.
It was a lie, but I still am
wondering what is there far beyond.

I knew the time would come to us -
it will separate the very best friends.
It was so sad, but I still am
wondering what is there far beyond.

If there was a way
to get back to the day
when we made the promise
to be under the stars -
wondering what is there far beyond.

Over many years to come
I think of Ты under the stars.
I am still here - all alone -
wondering what is there far beyond.

Ты will be the same, but it's okay
because I will be there
under the stars to watch over you.

Wondering what is there far beyond."

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Tell me, what Ты thinked & give me еще ideas, if Ты liked ~<3