I kinda do not like the intro, I never knew how to write a good one. ... As if something is missing .. What do Ты think???

*This is a story about a girl with a separated mind.

**Parts of sentences that are in parentheses tells bad Mia, and the one that are not, tells good Mia.

Being me is cool,( and not so cool.) I do not hate people, (except for maybe the geeks and sycophants, fools, idiots .. and so on.) I am quite an ordinary girl,( who likes a lot of strange things.) I'm a good person,( almost.) I like animals,( when they do not bother me.) And I Любовь movies,( about murder and mystery.) I'm not violent,( if there are witnesses around.) And one еще thing:

I have a separated mind. One part is good and one bad,( very bad and very real.) Hi I am good Mia,( and i'm bad Mia.) This i my story,( and mine.)