Письмо Article: Would Ты guys read this?

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posted by BURITOES

Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically Письмо this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)

So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 год old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 год old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 год on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave Главная and find help herself.

So yeah, if Ты liked this, please Комментарий and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)

Kadaj and writer67 like this

writer67 not bad , the path to find enlightenment or help is always everlasting,groovy title, a place of our own;-]

awesome-ninja sounds good to me :)

BURITOES Thank you guys SO much, I really wanna write more, and I probably will. :)

2dolphn97 sounds pretty good tho its not my type of book i know tons of people who would read it

The girl who cried волк chapter 4

posted by greenstergirl

These people were crazy and I wasn't thinking that JUST because half of the people in the room were old people.

I pulled at the sleeve of my grey jump suit and сказал(-а) nothing. There was nothing for me to say. I was being tested on this hocus pocus. In the end I'll be like any other normal kid and I would go Главная with no special power или no animal inside me. Right?

Tiachi got up out of his chair on the elemental side. "Okay Janie. We shall test Ты for your element first. If nothing happens, then we will test Ты for your animal. If something does happen we will test Ты for animal just in case...

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The girl who cried волк chapter 3

posted by greenstergirl

Chapter 3

In front of me was a world like no other. Danny called it BOES but it was nowhere near being a building. There were trees everywhere. In the distance were a couple mountains. There were so many plants, trees, flowers, lakes, ponds, and hills that it could almost be described as a fairy world. I almost thought it was a fairy world from seeing a bunch of pretty Русалки in the ponds, gigantic огонь breathing Драконы in the sky, naiads, centaurs, and many еще mythological Животные that I can’t name. There were even real animals, like elephants and cats, cheetahs,...

The Troubled Series

posted by kaylap1410

We were all different, all chosen for different reasons. Some of us african american, some as white as can be. But in a way we were all the same. That is the reason they chose us, followed us since birth. Macy was one of the richest children alive, but when her parents died in a car accident she was left with nothing. Being underaged, the bank had the entitlement to take all her parents money, leaving her to fend for herself on the streets. Hunter's house caught on огонь and destroyed his mother's locket. The last thing he had of her, the last thing that kept him happy. Lila was only two years...

Never to late Preface/chapter one. part one

posted by Funnygirl77

Okay first of let me start out by saying that I know this (meaning my Название is a song.) So plz don't say anything about it. секунда This story is not fully developed, me and my friend only have chapter one and we don't even know what it's about yet lol. the last thing i need to say is that i can not spell, okay! so if Ты don't have anything nice to say plz don't say it at all. now the story hope Ты enjoy. :)p.s that doesn't me Ты cant tell me what Ты think of the story, if u thought it was bad say so, but in a nice way. don't destroy my dream!!! Okay now the story.
Preface
I hid my eyes...

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When Dreams Become Reality Chapter 3

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

Here is the end of the last chapter!

Alexis was wandering in the huge feilds that were behind her new school. The long трава was up to her thighs and every now and then one stray peice would some how tickle her bare skin, making her angry. She wasnt in the mood to laugh. The sun was still glowing but the fields seemed gloomy and cold. It was cold. Alexis rubbed her arms heating them up slightly. Once she felt that she had walked far enough she flattened some of the long трава and sat down, lying back on the трава and watching the clouds go by. Her long golden hair flowed by her sides. She pulled...

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Running (poem)

posted by EmzLovesCheryl

Always running
All the time,
Chasing a dream
As I follow the signs.
Out of breath
I miss a turn,
I wander the paths
Ready to learn.

I start to get impatient
I'm working so hard,
So how come I'm not there yet
I've played all my cards.
Life is like a rollercoaster
Mine never stops,
It takes me round in circles
Back to the start.

There are so many highs and lows
Yet they''re all the same,
I need a change of track
Something different to my name.
Each step I take aches my body
And I'm waiting for the day,
That a different train will come along
And take me a different way.

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Hope (poem)

posted by EmzLovesCheryl

Dusty Streets
A blazing sun,
Еда and Water
There is none.
Living on hope
Crying out,
Helping others
Around and about.

Children Shouting
They wail and cry,
Willing for a change
A signal, a sign.
They're grateful for everytihng
Whatever comes their way,
They're constantly working
All night, all day.

The air is filthy
They cough and they weep,
They want to survive
They sniffle and sleep.
Begging off strangers
It's all they can do,
Someone to help them
It could be you.

-Emily Eaton (13)

Never Been In Любовь - Chapter One

posted by kateeuy

Amerie sat at her table, staring at a young man who sat directly opposite from her. He wore a black suit with a black and white mask covering his face. She turned around to seek her best friend Jen, smiling at her. Amerie then turned back around to see that the man had disappeared. The feel of someones breath suddenly blew on her neck. As she turned around, she saw the man standing behind her with his hand out. "Would Ты like to dance" asked the man politely. "I'd Любовь to" Amerie replied, taking his hand.

As they danced under the sparkle of the disco ball, the energy of the night was exstatic....

My attempt at a story ( The Clock Keeps Ticking день 1)

posted by Buddy8fnj

My bike popped up a speed bump and sent me sailing вперед a few feet, until i landed and bumbped the last half a mile to my normal little house of the corner of Clock Street. I skidded to a stop and threw my bike in the garage, then went inside.

"Hey...Mom, I'm home!" I called. I called a few times after that, then i got into the кухня and saw the usual yellow sticky note on the fridge. "Off at work, very important, пицца in the fridge." I sighed and tore the stick night off, then ripped it up and chucked it in the trash.

I was up in my room on my laptop when it all began. There was a ding...

Любовь kills Chapter 25

posted by hannah_vampire

A poem danced in my head “Something maybe Taken but its not Lost” Dylan had attacked and miles stood watching speaking “Loka please you’re as much As synotta, you’re evil and full of darkness”. I was pushed and bite and stabbed until they backed up and I saw what they were seeing wolves! “ aw are the Ishavaka scared of the big bad wolves”.

Tilly chased after them with hunter and josh, Wounded I was and this was about to get
A whole lot worse “ WHAT THE HECK WERE Ты THINGKING” Oni made me smile and I had to stop myself from bursting out into laughter but then sefo walked...

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Ты Know You're A Writer When...

posted by Phangirl7

Ты Know You're A Writer When. . .
(feel free to agree или disagree with any of these.)

-You skip meals или don't eat as much because you're too eager to get back to the story Ты were working on. (Yeah, I did this at lunch today. Deliberatly stopped eating early 'cause I had to get back to my story.)

-You have a notebook and pen или pencil that Ты carry everywhere. (Mine's right here Далее to me.)

-You freak out if ANYTHING happens to сказал(-а) notebook. (I start going ballistic if I even set it down in a different place and it takes me a минута to remember where I set it.)

-You listen to songs and think,...

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Being Strong.......

posted by hikaru13

I have a secret: I'm afraid. I'm terribly afraid that I AM GOING TO DIE. I didn't ask for leukemia. Nor did I expect it. Especially not chronic myelogenous leukemia. Especially when chronic myelogenous leukemia tends to affect the OLDER males, and I'm only what, 14?

But do Ты know why it has to be a secret? I have a family: my dad and Jae, my youngest sister. [Yeah, I have two more, but, they're out of my life at the moment.] They cried their hearts out once I was diagnosed. They were afraid that they'd lose another family member--after all, my mother passed away after a car accident. I promised to be strong. For Dad. For Jae. For Mom.

But if being strong means that I have to hold back all these tears, that I have to surpress all my fear in order to comfort my family, sometimes I wish I didn't make that promise.

Elaine and Cassie part 1

posted by alliXcobber

Cassie
I dragged my feet through the cold gray slush and shoved my hands deeper in my pockets. i hurried down the улица, уличный with my head hung. Icy bits of hail pelted my back as they hurtled down from the dark, November sky above. As i entered the doors of the hospital, a strong balst of warm air hit me. i whipped the folded sheet of paper of out my cold pocket and warily walked up to the front desk. My dark brown hair hung like icicles.
"I'm Cassandra Little. I'm here to see Elaine Turner," i muttered.

Elaine
I coulnt move. i couldnt eat. i coulnt drink. i couldnt think. i coulnt even breathe right....

He is staring at me! (Chapter one)

posted by lovepop

I was in the class the other day, and Mrs.Crosswaer was handing out new assignments. And he stared at me! Oh his name is Sam, and he was staring at me dreamly!!!!!!!!!!!
It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooool!

I am SO SORRY! It had to be lonfer so yeah!

The factory (just a temporary titel)

posted by QueridaPantufa

It was winter 1957. Everything was covered in snow and ice. It was the coldest time of the year. Especially for John Keensley. At the moment he was lying in the park, on a bench. He had put some old newspapers on him, trying to get a little bit warmer. It didn’t matter anyway, since it was snowing all night long. He hadn’t slept for about four nights now. Not since he escaped his prison, the orphanage. Now he was caught in a whole new prison. He spent the whole день trying to find food. He didn’t have any money though, so sometimes he украл, палантин some Еда to get through the day. When it started...

back yard world part 2 finding sintareea

posted by fly210

The день Liz steped foot in her grandma's old house there was a strang feeling in the air. When Liz stoped unpacking she went out to the little town that she and her Друзья had made. The town was in a crest of bushes and trees. Liz got some of her toys and went out side to the town. She had started playing with her Куклы when she saw a розовый бабочка flying around her. Liz got up and tryed to get it but it went through a куст, буш on the right side Далее to the house. Liz looked at the buch but she saw a brown thing. Liz crawled under the куст, буш and saw the brown thing covered with vines. Liz cleared...

Hidden in the darkness (lies the ugly truth) chapter four

posted by I_DONT-KNOW

Эй, guys, i hope u like this one......

Destiny.i found it just where i was trying to
hide from it.

I dragged Jared into the side, and leaned him up against the wall. I used my sleve to wipe the most of his blood from his face, and checked the rest of his body. he seemed intact. I took another shaky breath to calm myself down; all that mattered was finding out the truth. I laughed, but it sounded; wrong. I dint nottice that jared had woke from the startled sound, and was staring at me shocked. i turned around to face him, and stopped abruptly. his eyes flicked to the blood on my sleve, and back...

One lonely sunday afternoon - song

posted by Aquamarina

I know it's short, I made it just for fun :)

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One lonely sunday afternoon
I sit in my chamber and have nothing to do
My Любовь is far away
I wonder if (s)he's already forgotten me

So I sadly watch the sky
See the raindrops passing by

One looonely sunday afternooon...
One looonely sunday afternoon

One lonely sunday afternoon
I'm even as my Цветы still out of bloom
I find some old photos, covered with dust
I cannot forget Ты although I know that I must

So I sadly let them fly
And this time I have to cry

One looonely sunday afternooon...
One looonely sunday afternoon

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I've Always Been Different Chapter Four "Forever"

posted by M169

A car crash, could my parents be that careless that I can’t even get a ride Главная from the hospital without getting in another life threatening situation? Could they care so little about my safety and well being that they’d almost kill me again? “I CAN’T DO THIS ANYMORE!” I hear I boys’ voice shout stridently. It was Matt, “I can’t just be your guardian angel! I have to be with Ты forever now! Why can’t Ты stay out of trouble Elizzy?” No one’s ever called me that before, not my parents, babysitters, friends, или even crazy old people…I like it! “Is that why Ты abandoned...

Leaving Ilias: Swept Away Chap. 1

posted by ButteBaby_K

An image found that somewhat looks like the image of Phim I had in my head. ")

Chapter 1: Остаться в живых in my own world of thought, a common occurrence, the rain left me like always. I remained standing moving with breeze, as the rain receded leaving me pondering my thoughts. I smiled to myself. Ilias, my name was derived from his. I was born in a great time of sorrow, called Ravasn; for that was the name of death, which there was much of nearly 15 years назад on the день of my beginning. A massive drought had plagued Phim for 7 years for the rain spirit was greatly wounded by the indecency of my people. They had Остаться в живых his trust and his respect, and I was the solution. My mother had...