this is an English sonnet I had to write for my English class and I need to know if it is good или not before I Отправить it, thank you. also the rhyme scheme is ababcdcdefefgg
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My dear Любовь Ты once were a shining ray.
In my eyes Ты meant the whole world to me.
Now everything about Ты is a shade of gray.
Like your beauty, your emotions, and your Любовь is what I see.
However we must part onto our new paths.
Because our Любовь is coming to its new close.
Цвета were a beauty but now gray spreads its wrath.
I would Любовь to feel again but now it’s a ghost.
Our Любовь has left this earth for old times’ sake.
But when our Любовь left it took Ты along too.
Sadly it left me with all this heartache.
Dying Любовь was something I wish I had clues to
If someone told me Любовь would never be easy
I would have chosen another path that’s breezy