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At first I'd like to remark that english isn't my mothertongue. I tried hard to translate my little story into proper english, but maybe I made a few mistakes. However, I'm posting the english and the german version now, so just read them both if Ты understand it. :)
Here it is:

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One wonderful day, it finally was at her feet. She hadn't seen it for days, and the longing had nearly cankered her. She had missed it like a lover или a brother, no, more; like a piece of herself. It looked even еще beautiful than in her memory, how it sprawled in the sun. She was surprised, how gentle it could be. In her homeland, it had often been much wilder. But still it had stayed the same, a well-known friend, who had waited for her. She felt its appeal like a magnet. It belonged to her. She belonged to it. But they both belonged to the night. Now was not their time. Not now, with all the tourists around, watching them. She smiled at the sight of the children who played with it. How безопасно, сейф they felt. They didn't know anything, anything about the hidden character of their playmate, anything about his very secrets that only she knew. It had confided in her, just the same as how she had confided in it. She was different. Captured in the wrong world. She felt so much closer to it than to any human. She had to pull herself together to not give in the desire. The hours of darkness would give enough time for them.

One wonderful evening, it sparkled in the starlight. It was disquietingly. In spite of its greatness and power, it was just a little kid, unwilling to sleep. It tossed and turned impatiently. It was waiting for her, asking when she finally was coming. Encouraged by its swoosh, she hurried down the beach. Her сердце was throbbing in excitement. Finally, the moment had come that they had both been waiting for. Under cover of darkness, they showed each other their true colours. Quickly, she stripped off her clothes and careless kicked her sandales in the sand. It was calling her. She would come. Now

One wonderful night, she passed a swimming prohibition sign like in trance. She only caught a glimpse of it. The humans were so Невероятное silly. It didn't trust anyone who didn't trust it either. She had always trusted it, she had put her life in its cool hands, and it had never hurt her so far. But it seemed that nobody apart her understood that.
Wildly, she buckled in its cold embracement. It took her breath. Delirious with joy, it roared in her very ears. It smothered her, and she enjoyed it. Her сердце nearly burst of felicity. Although she was running out of air, she was diving deeper. She merged with it. She was coming home.

One wonderful morning, a few lorn clothes lay in the sunlight in the midst of the dunes.

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An einem wunderschönen Tag lag es ihr endlich zu Füßen. Schon seit Tagen hatte sie es nicht mehr gesehen, und die Sehnsucht hatte sie fast zerfressen. Sie hatte es vermisst wie einen Geliebten oder Bruder, nein, mehr, wie einen Teil ihrer selbst. Es sah noch schöner aus als in ihrer Erinnerung, wie es sich in der Sonne räkelte. Sie war erstaunt, wie sanft es sein konnte. In ihrer Heimat war es oft viel wilder gewesen. Und doch war es gleich geblieben, ein altbekannter Freund, der auf sie gewartet hatte. Sie spürte seine Anziehungskraft wie einen Magneten. Es gehörte zu ihr. Sie gehörte zu ihm. Doch sie beide gehörten der Nacht. Jetzt war nicht ihre Zeit. Nicht jetzt, mit all логово, ден Menschen, die zuschauten. Sie lächelte beim Anblick der Kinder, die mit ihm spielten. Wie sicher sie sich fühlten. Sie wussten doch nichts, nichts über логово, ден wahren Charakter ihres Spielkamerads, nichts über seine tiefsten Geheimnisse, die nur sie kannte. Ihr hatte es sich anvertraut, so wie auch sie sich ihm anvertraut hatte. Sie war anders. Gefangen in der falschen Welt. Keinem Menschen fühlte sie sich so nah wie ihm. Sie musste sich zusammenreißen, um sich nicht der Versuchung hinzugeben. Die Stunden der Dunkelheit würden genug Zeit für sie beide lassen.

An einem wunderschönen Abend funkelte es im Sternenlicht. Es war unruhig. Mit all seiner Größe und Macht war es doch noch ein kleines Kind, das noch nicht schlafen wollte. Ungeduldig wälzte es sich hin und her. Es wartete auf sie, fragte sich, wann sie endlich kam. Angespornt von seinem Rauschen rannte sie ihm entgegen. Ihr Herz klopfte vor Aufregung. Endlich. Jetzt war der Moment, auf логово, ден sie beide gewartet hatten. Im Schutz der Dunkelheit zeigten sie einander ihr wahres Gesicht. Eilig streifte sie ihre Kleider ab und kickte ihre Sandalen achtlos in логово, ден Sand. Es rief nach ihr. Sie würde kommen. Jetzt.

In einer wunderschönen Nacht lief sie wie in Trance an einem Schwimmverbotsschild vorbei. Sie erhaschte nur einen kurzen Blick darauf. Die Menschen waren so unglaublich dumm. Wer ihm nicht vertraute, dem vertraute es auch nicht. Aber das verstand wohl niemand außer ihr. Sie hatte ihm immer vertraut, hatte sich ihm voll ausgeliefert, und es hatte ihr dabei noch nie etwas getan. Stürmisch warf sie sich in seine kühle Umarmung. Es nahm ihr логово, ден Atem. Übergeschnappt vor Wiedersehensfreude brüllte es ihr in die Ohren. Es erdrückte sie, und sie genoss es. Ihr Herz platzte fast vor Glück. Obwohl ihr die Luft knapp wurde, tauchte sie tiefer. Sie wurde eins mit ihm. Sie war zu Hause.

An einem wunderschönen Morgen lagen in логово, ден Dünen einige verlassene Kleidungsstücke im Sonnenlicht.

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Hope, Ты enjoyed it! Now it's your turn: Please tell me your opinion about it!
For those of Ты who didn't see my pick, I'm trying to decide whether I should reveal at the beginning of my book, that a main character is going to die at the end. These are three versions of opening paragraphs that I've written. If there's one that Ты like the best, let me know in the Комментарии или in the pick.

1. This one gives away the most information, including when she dies and how she's killed:
I had no idea when I started at Skip’s Burger Grill, that on October 22, 2009, sitting there in the walk-in refrigerator, huddled together with my colleagues for warmth, my life would be changed...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 2: the Cullen’s
When I entered, the club my fave song was on so I went and joined the crowed and started dancing with a really cute guy he had blond hair and dark blue eyes that u could swim in them like, forever! We started talking about our past and figured out his name is tom and has two sisters. then I made one up as I did for my school and then he bought me a few dinks after an час I found myself making out with him I really didn’t like him I just like to spend my time with someone until I break the damn curse and find the one for me, the one that will be my moon and light...
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“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” сказал(-а) Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...
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Give away to the morning

Light is here

Look away from the mourning

Is she gone, is she still...?


And let the день go ahead

Without you

Find a place, a dark space

To hide you

What’s a day, a sunny day

To you?

Fade away, let the your rainclouds

Guide you


There goes the downpour

Long gone your hello...


Find it in you

To make that last stand

It’s a silent drive

It’s her very last one.


Here come the clear skies

There goes your fare well...
posted by Sweet_Pants
Find the casual sun day

Starting with the stumbling wake-up, the strained smile

Smelling the hurried breakfast, bile up her throat

Shrinks away from it, queasy, holding her stomach

Never letting it leave her, the emptiness filling up

Inside her, determined to make it last


Heavy textbooks never all that’s holding her down

Uncertainty sawing through her, the only thing filling

What she considers a burden, but how could hunger

Be so cruel?

It’s drilling into her, snarling, never dulling

Never letting up, just a little longer

A little longer...


She dry heaves, it’s a tiny stall

And the walls are closing...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
If Ты spend your life wishing to die, willing to end it yourself, even, and the chance was given, would Ты take it? If Ты had chosen that fate, when your breath became slow and painful, would Ты still wish that on yourself? In the shadow of death, would the reality of it dawn on you, when it was just too late?

A life of darkness was not one worth much, to Taylor.

She had been so desperate to die. Willing to do it herself, had it been possible.

She lifted the нож to her bared forearm.

The flat, cold edge of the blade pierced the pale skin of her wrist. She felt no pain from it.

The midnight...
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posted by kayleebabee
The flight from New york to Rome took an excrutiatingly long time to land and all the while i was getting еще and еще annoyed with Edward. "as soon as we land we will run to Volterra okay." I muttered quickly braiding my hand through Edwards and sighing contentedly.
"I know that it's just what if we are too late?" his voice broke on the word late.
"we won't be i promise." I didn't know if that was true but i was trying to soothe him i better not voice my true opinion out loud. I half dragged a depressed Edward through the terminals and growled sharply as I saw the bright sunlight outside.
"Oh...
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posted by kayleebabee
Edward and i made the flight to new york with moments to spare.
while the girl scanned our passports through the database i tried to call carlisle. Again.
"Edward your growling stop it." i muttered to low for the human woman to hear.
"right sorry do Ты think we will make it in time?" his words were cracked and strained in his effort to keep it together.
"I hope so Edward, I really do." i sighed delicately.
we got to our seats on the plane edward was muttering a stream of profanities.
"It is faster than running." I tried to placate him.
"i know that." he hissed at me.
"Hey don't take this out on me."...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening by the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...
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Chapter 2:Getting to know him
Murphy
I spent break alone in the библиотека tiring to find a book I've wanted to read for a while-Pride and Prejudice.
It would have been nice to spend break with Savannah,catching up what all happened during the summer,but she had to spend it with her Популярное friends. I never liked them and they have never been nice to me. I was always too shy and geeky, I guess.
Stacey was the head of the group,the team captain. I remember when I met her-in third grade. She pushed me down to get to the swings first on the playground. That doesn't matter anymore, except that she...
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Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue или white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much еще than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a таблица that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw еще of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...
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posted by genyva
New Smells


The smell. There was nothing like it the first день at school. I looked to my brother. This was our first school год in Maine. The weather was crappy all the time but it was worth it I am not really a night person. Whose to say I have to do everything like my parents. This is the new millennium not 15 hundreds.

My family is different. Other then the fact that we have lived for hundreds of years, we are also vampire. 40 years ago, the human world found out about our world. Slowly rights were made to fit our needs, and schools were open for the young and unadvised. Humans could fall...
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Chapter Sixteen

The Далее день and after Church, Sean came over to see the girls and while seeing him playing happily with the girls and with Boyd on the right side of her chair, Jamie was thinking about breaking Mac’s promise and going ahead with the ужин together with Sean but she couldn’t because she promised her little girl and don’t want to see her сердце being broken and so will Michael if he finds out about the ужин with Sean and his wife.

Also, when Sean turned to her and gave her a slight grin on his face before heading back with the girls, Jamie also smiled at him and after...
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posted by sweetpea92
    CHAPTER ONE
    Ugh. I groaned internally as I woke up. My head was pounding, and broken Обои were swirling around behind my eyelids. I had no idea where I was, или how I had gotten here. I refused to open my eyes and find out, или give any other sign that consciousness had found its way back to me again. Not knowing exactly where and when I was was a dangerous business for me. Very dangerous.
    You see, the last thing I remember before the blackness hit, is that I was running…
    My legs were on fire. They...
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posted by nEvEr-tHe-sAme
The rain fell silently as I layed there waiting. Not like I had a choice though. But it had seemed еще like a nightmare than reality. This wasn't how I imagined it... I never even got the chance to say goodbye. Let alone even explain what happened. I needed to wake up... from this nightmare, I tried, but never could... never did.

Life lesson: I learned that trusting people isn't what it actually seemed. There's еще to it than Ты would ever imagine, I mean, it's not just trusting people, but it's who to trust. How can we tell? There might be some ways we think we can tell, but those ways......
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Chapter 1


Artemis Galchowen was going nowhere fast. At the age of 23, he was fired from his job as a theatre consumptions stand steward. At the age of 24, he was living with his two cousins, who worked for the секунда most successful auto dealer in the nation. At the age of 26, he was kicked out of their house for destroying their $200,000 Mercedes while on a drunken rampage.
At the age of 29, he was working at a secondhand Манга book Магазин and also worked at IHOP for a few еще bucks. He lived at Cricket Slope Farms development in a tiny condo with his two supportive friends, Zeke and Megan....
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posted by BellaSwan636
Shaun

It feels like a piercing physical wound; to see her leave me again.

I cannot access the part of me that handles realisation. Serena called her Ashleigh. That child in her arms. Is mine.

My forehead is resting on the edge of the hard granite countertop, and I am trying to ignore the card that is currently lying right in front of me. I already know what is printed on it by heart.

Serena Meyer

Gaurdian Ad Litem, New York.

serenashleigh@mweb.com


And then a number scrawled on in her own handwriting.

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Her eyes haunt me when I close my own. Everything...
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posted by Isabellaashley
PREFACE


The woods were filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and there he appeared from the treetops of a nearby дерево and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers down my spine before slowly approaching me and my сердце was pounding inside my chest. I was vulnerable as there wasn’t anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to die here, alone. Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing...
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posted by Sweet_Pants
A/N: Ok, this is just a short, about 500 word drabble I came up with. It's about 7-year-old Alice and her drunk derpressed father, called, of course, 'Daddy'. It's not much, but I though I'd post it. Constructive critisizm is welcome.

Please rate and comment.
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The smell of his breath came off in waves of grief and alcohol mixed into what could be described as inner turmoil. Although Alice barely gave a thought to the bottle of whiskey in his hand, as she was еще preoccupied with not throwing up from the smell of her father she should have gotten...
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The snow is falling on this cold blistery afternoon.
    Just up ahead, in the clearing I could see a young woman gloriously and delicately skating. Skating, as if she had skated her entire life.
Suddenly, I began remembering an adventure that seemed so many moons ago.
Beyond the horizon I could see myself walking briskly toward the solid, cold ice that kept me Холодное сердце in silence.
I could hear the ice crackling, like попкорн being popped, beneath my shaking feet.
As I adventured onto to the ice, I felt a cold chill creep up my back that seemingly felt like a warning sign to...
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