i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
Ты were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house или fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
Ты did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
Ты сказал(-а) your chance at Любовь had past Ты by
i told i'm here so dont Ты cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
Ты were like my juliet and i your romeo
Ты Любовь me i Любовь Ты thats all i need to know
no longer will Ты dream of Любовь thats true
no longer will i wander my Поиск has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd Любовь some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
Ты are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as Ты lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are сердце at name.
Ты may notice that only the секунда verse rhymes, this is an attempt to Показать the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
Ты are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as Ты lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are сердце at name.
Ты may notice that only the секунда verse rhymes, this is an attempt to Показать the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.