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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing Ты to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Ты truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Ты start posting. It can be as little as a bio, или as big as an entire Статья series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no еще than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he или she is in, can pull out another trick out of his или her hat.
4. If Ты absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his или her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Болталка and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Ты have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Далее день you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own или is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Последнее outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, или claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Ты must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, или so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Ты do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot или stabbed in the heart, then pop up минуты later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull или flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to или dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to или dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing или potential character is a Mary Sue, или if Ты suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Ты can take link. If Ты want, Ты can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Ты were curious, which Ты probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Ты want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do Ты have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by khanna266
a год after Ari and Jaime started dating

Dick had let Jaime into Ari's room to wake her up so he shook her a little. Ari tossed her self facing away from him,"Come on amour wake up it's are one год anniversary today"he сказал(-а) to her."Mmm happy anniversary baby",she muttered under her breath"*chuckles* your so cute when Ты sleep",
he laughed,"Will Ты carry me downstairs please?",she asked speaking louder. Jaime
smirked and did as she asked.Once they got downstairs he sat her on the couch,"*yawns* thanks babe",Ari thanked him now wide awake
"No problem amour,"he smirked and gave her a Kiss on the...
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posted by Robin_Love
 When his hair was brown
When his hair was brown
Name: Aidan Wolffe
Alias: Frost
Powers: ice, snow, weather manipulation, intangibility, skilled with a staff
Occupation: “Guardian”; Hero
Weakness/Limits: He can only be intangible for a short time; he can only make it snowy или rainy with his weather manipulation (so he can make a blizzard); he has a to his ice-make magic.
History: Aidan has been mistaken as Jack Frost since his powers arrived. He was only 9 when it happened and, in fear of being shunned by his parents and friends, he ran away. However, it wasn't long before he realized that some problems were worse than his fears. He...
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 A Goatrider
A Goatrider
( Oke, the archives of morte will be a series of Статьи in whist I will describe everything Thad has to do whit the lore of teyrions world thad I am creating truw this archives and further story's to come.)

Origin of the Riders:
The goatriders were a small group of bandits who fleeing fore the law ended up in the Kingdom of Morte were they advantly were couth by a patrol of King Tyrion Blackwell, the bandits feared fore tere lives expecting to be killed fore there crimes.
But Tyrion seeing Thad the bandits only украл, палантин to keep themselves and tere family's alive made them a offer, if they would...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Jeremy Thompson

Alias: Jet Stream

Age:18

Appearance: brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin and tall.

Personality: he takes a leadership role in situations and tries his best to do right for those around him. he is accepting to everyone, nice ,caring, protective of the ones he loves.

Relationship: cousin to Bentley, dating Tori

Powers/Skills:he has all the combat skills he grew up learning, he still has the hooks he uses in combat. creating a small burst of speed only really used for get aways или sneak attacks and can create smoke when he does his small burst of speed. He can also create a fire...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
"Suavemente, besame que quiero sentir tus labios besandome otra vez......" Suavemente one of the most famous spanish song sung by Elvis Crespo was now playing loud into their ears as feet and waist moved to the beat.

Everyone knew that Becca and Phoebe were two girls that had good sense of rhythm and could dance to any and every song that played on a stereo. But just for a fun Nic, Aryess and Megan had made the Друзья challenge each other to a dance off. Since both girls were good deciding the best would be tough so they challenge each other for their stamina.

Nic , Aryess and Megan watched...
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posted by Caitlyn_Grayson
 Caitlyn
Caitlyn
Name: Caitlyn Eleanor Grayson
Alias: BrightStar
Age: 14
Relationship to Team: Robin’s cousin
Appearance: Caitlyn is tall, about 5’6” или 5’7”. She has straight blonde hair, a little longer than shoulder length, that she sometimes wears in a ponytail, and blue eyes (like those of her cousins Dick, Kyra, and Danna). She wears a blue t-shirt или tank вверх and short-shorts (at least on sunny days).
Personality: Caitlyn is fun, funny, and always cheerful and in a good mood. She is very high energy, extremely practical and a good problem solver. She is confident, friendly, and really determined...
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January 3, 2108

"Mom? Mom?" An explosion came from the sewers, dust and debris shooting up the manhole. Julie gasped. "Oh no..." Gas mask. I need a gas mask. She ran into a house and started looking around. "Shit shit shit, I need a gas mask!" Julie opened closets and drawers; but couldn't find anything. Then she cracked open a chest and found everything Ты would need for a bomb, so of course there were gas masks. She quickly put one on, grabbed a flashlight, and ran back out, almost tripping a few times. The girl jumped into the hole and turned on the light. She walked as quickly as she could...
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posted by BladeYJ
((Idk how it happened..))

~

I was awoken by the creeping of my door's hinges. Quickly, I sat up; looking for who had the nerve to intrude my sleep. And as my lonesome eye scanned my perimeters, the silver moonlight fluttered along the curtains and poured into the room.

Everything seemed normal, all things went undisturbed by the entity, nothing seemed to be roused. In turn, I stood and gradually-tiredly-made my way over to the door, closing it before resting my head on the door; dead bolting it shut. Breathing in an exasperated breath, I brought my head back and moseyed back to my bed. Which...
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posted by BladeYJ
"Blade?" His voice was stuck in his throat. Before him stood the girl he loved. She stared; her red orbs beyond vibrant, as her platinum hair drapped just below her shoulders, obviously grown out since he last saw her.

Since he last saw her?
The last time he saw her: She had blood-sucking fangs in place of canines.
The last time he saw her: She breathed the last ounce of air in her lungs to tell him,""I Любовь you.."
The last time he saw her: She died, and from then on, the only thing that was left of her was the harsh guilt sitting in his heart.

But now? Now she was in front of him, arms around...
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posted by GlitterPuff
January 2, 2108

Rene ran into the main room that everyone always hung out in and set out all of her items on the table. Julie chased behind her, confused beyond belief. When she reached the room, her mom had a liquid spilled onto her hands and he used it to draw a symbol on the floor.

"What are Ты drawing?"

"A spell- Ah, it's too complicated to explain." She wiped the blueish purple color off on her red jeans and continued her work, grabbing different bottles and adding them to the spell formula. The sorceress grabbed a thick spell book and opened it, blowing off some dust before hand. "Damn...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Jessie
Jessie
So I did this awhile back so Ты could get to know my ocs on a bit of another level but I revamped it so Jessie gets 2

Name: Jessie Bennett

Likes: Gardening

Best Friend: Joan (Alix Penn)

Loves: Animals

Dislikes: Poaching/Hunting

Worst Habit: Sleeping at her desk

Personal Secret: Is used to hurting herself for the need of others

Избранное Food: Anything Meat-Free (Vegetarian)

Избранное Color: Turquoise или Jade

Code Name: None

Mentor/Inspiration: Poison Ivy

Relations: None

Base of Operations: JLA Headquarters

Personal Home: Garden of Eden
posted by Robin_Love
 Dalila
Dalila
LAYER ONE: THE OUTSIDE
Full Name: Dalila Summners
Nickname: Dali
Reason или meaning of name: Dalila means “Gentle” in Egyptian
Eye Color: Green
Hair Style/Color: Dark brown/black
Height: 5’ 7
Clothing Style: Ancient
Best Physical Feature: Skin

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: I have none
Your Guilty Pleasure: Scratches
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: Loud barking dogs
Your Ambition for the Future: To thrive!

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Another 5 минуты won’t hurt
What Ты Think About the Most: My partner
What Ты Think About Before Bed: Finally some rest!
You Think Your Best Quality...
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posted by SilverWings13
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Анастасия Alexovna Aldric (née Romanova)
Reason или meaning of name: Анастасия was her aunt's name, means "resurrection"; her middle name is a derivative of her father's name, Alexei; born Romanova, but recently married; Aldric means "wise ruler"
Eye Color: forest green
Hair Style/Color: auburn; curly; usually intricately braided
Height: 5' 2" ((v smol))
Clothing Style: comfortable. Simple jeans and a long sleeve t-shirt if she's not going to meet anyone.
Best Physical Feature: my...hair? ((It's wild, but soooo soft))

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: disappointing the...
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posted by Robin_Love
She sat in the corner, hiding herself. Her mind reeled with everything she'd been through so far and all she could do was stare at the Стена in her dark room. This was nothing like she had expected and with every passing moment, her сердце sank deeper and deeper into despair.
He led her down a flight of stairs, towards one of the buildings. She could hear their whispers, see their eyes on her, watching her like she was a menace. She felt chilled and everything inside her screamed to get out. But it was too late; she was led into the largest building and she cried out at what she saw. He turned...
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posted by SilverWings13
I think еще than one person is Чтение this now. Ты GUYS MAKE ME SO HAPPY ILY

Anger had raged and begging had bombarded. Now the room was startlingly silent, as if a twister had ripped through and now the winds had died to nothing. The prince stared at the door as if the girl might come back and try again to change his mind. Her absence took any hope of forfitting the challenge with it.
Aliza remained still as stone while the king silently began to address his wounds. The robes were discarded. They revealed the handy work of Duke's masterpiece of what had once been flawless pale flesh stretched...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Devin the Cherubim
Devin the Cherubim
Name:Devin Grayson
Alias: Arch Энджел
Powers: Flight/wings, “Divine power”
Occupation: Hero
Weakness/Limits: Demon chants/weapons, high demon authority
History: Devin is the unborn child of John and Mary Grayson. As such, she entered heaven as a cherubim, a small baby-like Энджел in training. As a cherubim, Devin was taken from her sanctuary while she was out delivering a “divine message” (don't judge me!). She was taken by a very powerful demon named Teague. Unlike most demons, he had very strong magic that kept her hidden from those looking for her for several years. Due to their natures,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name:

Alias: none

Age ( that he looks like this): 16

Appearance: white hair like a white lion, auburn eyes almost like the colour of burning fire, and sharp teeth like a shark.

Height: 6 feet

Powers/ Abilities: like his mothers shapesifting abilities he has the ability to shapeshifting, not into Животные but into a weapon like his father is because of his огонь casting and hooks he uses to fight with.he can transform into a weapon using his body parts ( for example his arm as a scythe blade).

Relations: Tori's his mother, Jets his dad, Amara, Kai, and Daemian are considered cousins to him, Bentley,...
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posted by SilverWings13
Sowws if there are a billion typos, I’ve been waiting MONTHS to write this thing that took me twenty minutes. And yes, this is a week или two early, but the last Статья was like, a week или two late, so I'm pretending that they Отменить out. I know Ты guys are probs like OH LOOK еще DRAMA OOOOOH FUN with the deepest sarcasm, but juuust to keep anyone who wants to filled in...

It was delightfully quiet in the room. There was no еще screaming или shouting или rushing about the room. Yet it was far from over. The world would be set into fast вперед again soon, but for the moment Aryess was allowed...
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~{A/N}~ Ciel's POV. *Bows* Enjoy. ~{A/N}~



I am the shadow, and the smoke in your eyes,
I am the ghost, that hides in the night


I watched from the shadows, the young girl sitting in the window still. The long window was open, letting in a cold breeze, and snow. Her eyes narrowed at the distance, scars obvious in this light.
"What do Ты want." She spoke.
"Why are Ты down here?"

Boom-Lay Boom-Lay BOOM!
Boom-Lay Boom-Lay BOOM!
Boom-Lay Boom-Lay BOOM!
Boom-Lay Boom-Lay BOOM!


I shook my head, laying the picture face-down on the desk. The memory would hurt me еще than I already was, and I wasn't ready for...
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