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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing Ты to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Ты truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Ты start posting. It can be as little as a bio, или as big as an entire Статья series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no еще than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he или she is in, can pull out another trick out of his или her hat.
4. If Ты absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his или her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Болталка and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Ты have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Далее день you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own или is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Последнее outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, или claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Ты must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, или so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Ты do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot или stabbed in the heart, then pop up минуты later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull или flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to или dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to или dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing или potential character is a Mary Sue, или if Ты suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Ты can take link. If Ты want, Ты can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Ты were curious, which Ты probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Ты want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do Ты have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
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OOC: oke first, this story takes place a few years назад when gunfire was still imprisond in Ahrkam.


Twan sat on the tabel in the mess whit Harrley and Joker.
Is evryting redy? he ask looking at his mentor a bit worryd.
Joker opend his mout to sai somting bu harley was faster.
Dant worry kiddo, it will work. She сказал(-а) whit a reasuring smile, twan realaxed a bit.
Oke than when are we gaoing to set it of.
Tomorow at this time. Joker said.

Lunce is over back to your celles! A guard yelld, the door of the mess opend and they were let back to theyre cells, Joker Harley and Twan smiled shortly to eithsother...
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posted by WingsOfDeath
 Jackson...
Jackson...
"Here Ты go dear." Devin handed the ten год old child a gremlin/Frankenstein looking creation. It had floppy cat ears, different sized button for eyes, and different scraps of fabric holding the body together. An evil grin spread across the bulbous head, almost enough to creep out Fang.
"Thank Ты mommy!" Mel squealed in delight.
"This will chase the monsters away." Devin kissed the child's head. Mel giggled, planting a Kiss on her mother's cheek.
"Goodnight dear." Devin wrapped her arms around the small child, kneeling down. Mel wrapped her arms around her mother, giggling.
"His name is Jackson....
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 <3 *fangirls*
<3 *fangirls*
Tyler walked down the hall and passed Blade's room. Her door was still closed, unlike the others, and locked. Confusion rossed hi face but he continued into the main room, of The Cave, where the Рождество дерево was standing. He observed the scene. Phoebe and Dylan where cudding on the couch, Lexi was tearing through the presents, Aisling was waiting for Fin to get her a drink, and Fang and Devin where sitting, and laughing, listening to Mel's story about Santa.

The fire-caster made his way towards Mel,"Santa, eh?" He laughed. Mel glared at him,"I saw her! She was giving out pesents!"
"Right, Mel,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
What? I needed some brotherly and sisterly love!

Jaime woke up to a warm body Далее to him, and a purring furry mess at his head. He frowned and Lexi shifted, sitting up and rubbing her eyes. 
"Bubby?" Lexis small innocent voice echoed in the darkness. 
"What is it?" Jaime reached up and picked up Lexis cat, Snow, who had made a постель, кровати on Jaimes head. 
"What time is it?" Jaime looked over at his clock and petted Lexis head. 
"6:30, go back to sleep." Jaime laid on his side and Lexi snuggled up against him. 

  When Jaime opened his eyes again, the small body that had been curled up against him...
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posted by InfinityYJ
Five years. Mini-Mel and grown up Kenz. :3

Fin walked into the cave, defeated, the black and yellow of her cape ruffling out from behind her. Two. Two team members in one night. And that wasn’t even the worst of it. She ignored Nightwing’s pleading calls, Longshot’s silent mutters of “It wasn’t possible.” Not even Conner’s blind rage или M’gann’s soft sobs could deter her. Not until she got to her room.
When she did manage to get there, the mask was off in an instant and Kenzie fell to her bed, silent tears beginning to stream down her face. She curled up, throwing off the glove...
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posted by The_Writer
Red Revenge Series


Book One: "Revenge или Redemption" 
When the League of Assassins sends their two best assassins: падуб, holly, холли and Cheshire, to assassinate Samuel Grant, things could get difficult for the
Black Hero.


Book Two: "Jericho"
When the inhabitants of Venus begin a massive kill-all invasion of Earth, Red Revenge must team up with the Freedom Fighters to protect Earth. But that's not the only extreme measure he has to take. Giving падуб, holly, холли Green a costume of her own, she becomes his new partner Emerald. But can the World's Most Powerful Beings save the Earth?


Book Three: "Ravage"
A two parter! When...
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posted by Robin_Love
She opened her eyes, lifting her head. Everything was cloudy and dust misted over the ground. She coughed and managed to get on her hands and knees.
“Devin!” She coughed again. “Becca!”
She crawled вперед and found someone. Pale skin, flowing hair. Dressed in black, silver. She scurried back and coughed again.
“No way.”
She heard a moan and headed over towards it.
“Becca!”
“Erin? We get out?”
“Yeah. Ты okay?!”
“Just woozy.”
“I hear ya. Bec, we got a problem.”
“Wait! Where's Devin?!”
“Over here!”
The two crawled to where Devin's voice came from.
“Thank goodness...
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posted by Scarlet_YJ
 Korran's School Uniform
Korran's School Uniform
Name: Brette Lanulue
Alias: Korran
Age: 16
Power: Can manipulate people's shadows

Alliance: hero

Apearance: shoulder length white hair, cat ears and tail, 5 ft. 6", red eyes

Personality: kind, caring, childish mindset, brave, courageous, serious, friendly

History: Korran was дана her powers at the age of six, shortly after getting her powers she got her cat ears and tail. Her parents abandoned her because they believed she was a freak. Korran lived on the streets for two years before she found other kids like herself whose parents abandoned them because of their appearance. Korran stayed with her...
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posted by BladeYJ
 POCCKEEEEE
POCCKEEEEE
((want one? link
Serious face, don't get butthurt.. Crackships are called crackships for a reason...Hope this was pretty good, G, sorry if I failed xD ))


"Cat..?" He pushed himself into her room, his blonde hair masking the slight worry on his face. Again, he called for her carefully peeking under her постель, кровати and in her closet. Yet, to no prevail he couldn't find her.

~

Earlier

Terror entered the Cave looking for any hint at the whereabouts of a certain vampire. Unfortunately, there was only a shirtless Tyler and Cat who was stuffing her face with cookies.

Dark blue eyes raised from his "50 Shades...
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posted by Robin_Love
LAYER ONE : THE OUTSIDE
Name: Devin Adams
Reason или meaning of name: Divine
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Style/Color: Long and black (AND SILKY~!!)
Height: 5'11
Clothing Style: Modest
Best Physical Feature: I have none (Stop being humble. It's her eyes)

LAYER TWO: THE INSIDE
Your Fears: Losing everyone I love
Your Guilty Pleasure: My what? (Foot rubs)
Your Biggest Pet Peeve: I dislike those who devalue others (Bullies)
Your Ambition for the Future: I'm not thinking of the future

LAYER THREE: THOUGHTS
Your First Thoughts Waking Up: Checking on my loved ones
What Ты Think About the Most: Humanity
What Ты Think About...
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