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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing Ты to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Ты truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Ты start posting. It can be as little as a bio, или as big as an entire Статья series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no еще than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he или she is in, can pull out another trick out of his или her hat.
4. If Ты absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his или her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Болталка and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Ты have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Далее день you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own или is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Последнее outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, или claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Ты must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, или so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Ты do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot или stabbed in the heart, then pop up минуты later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull или flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to или dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to или dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing или potential character is a Mary Sue, или if Ты suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Ты can take link. If Ты want, Ты can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Ты were curious, which Ты probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Ты want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do Ты have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
added by SilverWings13
posted by GlitterPuff
January 2, 2108

Julie walked around, looking into old rooms, finding items she had never seen before. The names and numbers were still on peoples doors. She tried looking for certain people her mother had spoken of from time to time. A few doors later, she saw a room that belonged to Alex. Julie remembered hearing about Alex, and managed to open the door into his room. It was covered in clothing, probably dirty from when he was alive. She saw a few pictures on his table, one was of him and Rene where he looked super annoyed and she looked very happy and silly. In his closet, clothes were hanging...
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A мегера, лисица stood on the stage, adorning a black dress which fanned out, as pure white ruffles erupted from beneath the cloth. The ruffles hung to her feet and concealed her silver pumps.Lengthy silk hair, the color of death itself, cascaded and caressed her face and back. Her lips were painted black, matching the dark eye-shadow, sprinkled with glitter, on her lids. And as she leaned in and tapped the microphone with one gloved finger, all the men of the bar turned and looked upon her with hungry, lustful eyes.

One in particular stood out, his red eyes blazing as he looked the girl over. Shifting...
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posted by GlitterPuff
He sat in the cafe, looking at his watch. I wonder where she is? he thought to himself as he brushed a piece of his blonde hair out of his face. The колокол, колокольчик, белл on the door rang and his eyes flickered over to it, and he saw his date. Her dark blue dress fluttered as she walked over to him, her black blazer covering her chest; but Показ еще of her cleavage than usual. The dark haired girl stood in her track when she came to the table, her sneakered feet put together. The blonde boy stood up and pulled the chair out for her, which she awkwardly sat in.

"You look nice Amora," the boy told her in a...
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 Baby Ashley and her Mother
Baby Ashley and her Mother
In the white room all who were chained on the Стена were now wide awake with a slitting headache watching Phifi, Jaivus, Melody and Nate. Who were still caught in the memories that made them venerable to Honesty and the other beetle's torture. Whether it was of their guilt, grief, sadness, или anger fueled into the memory it kept repeating on the screens over and over and in their heads. Their physical bodies ache from the torture Lelisa provide from the real world event in a scream или clinching of their fists. However, they still watch as
Snowflake and Honesty exchange series of blows on each...
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posted by GlitterPuff
January 1, 2108

Julie ran through the door, panting as she slammed it shut. She ran a hand through her short black hair and walked into the living room of her old home. Rene sat on the диван, мягкий уголок staring at an old фото of her and her old Друзья and Zack. Julie knew that her mother had been crying because her hands had small streaks of black from her make-up.

"Mom?" She walked over to her mom and sat on the arm of the couch, looking at the фото with her. She pointed at a blur haired girl in the photo. "Who's that?"

"Ashley."

"And the blonde Далее to her?"

"Mel." A small smile ran across the red heads...
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posted by khanna266
Name:Khanna Min-ji
age:18
alias:red butterfly
powers:transforms into rabbit,controls snow and hail,super speed,creates bubbles w/hands,and manipulates water,snow,& ice
appearance:tan skin,brown hair,eyes change Цвета constantly
civvies:sometimes shorts and a tank-top and other times miniskirts and dresses
BG story:She came to Gotham city from Cali and met Dick Grayson who thought she could be useful to the team so he introduced her to everybody and she became good Друзья with supergirl and batgirl

<3<3<3<3hope Ты liked it!
ps:her family originates from japan.
 Khanna in civvies
Khanna in civvies
posted by MafiaYJ
Mafia sat alone on a rooftop, watching through binoculars, her target in a window across from her. The target wasn't aware of her of course, but some one else was. Mafia checked the time on her watch with a sigh. It was past midnight, but she needed this guy, preferably dead. It was easier to carry dead weight than live bait. Especially if he struggled. Sadly, Mafia had been right about one thing; her target would't be leaving the building any time soon. And she needed to have him before sundown. She sighed and tucked her red hair under her hat and pulled the воротник up, if she was spotted in...
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posted by SilverWings13
“Lesson learned: Avoid wearing cashmere on drug busts,” Vika stated as she glared as the culprit of her annoyance- a short navy dress and the red staining the white collar.
“Did Ты try hydrogen peroxide?” a voice behind her suggested. Of course the girl recognized his mocking Лондон accent. She attempted to sound miffed at his sneaking up on her unpronounced, but she could do little about the blush that darkened her cheeks.
“What are Ты doing in a lady’s bedroom?” she demanded from him, hoping to fluster him. But when she spun to face him, he was leaning leisurely in the doorway...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Oxpaha
Oxpaha
Name: Asmundur “Des” Celos
Alias: Oxpaha
Occupation: Hero/Trainer
Powers: A powerful set of unbreakable, inescapable, invulnerable handcuffs
Skills/talents: Basic улица, уличный fighting, all kinds of arsenal, a little bit of martial arts
Appearance: Brown/black hair and dark blue eyes
History:Des has a very strange history. His dad was a cop. His mother was a nurse. Because of their work, he saw little of them and еще of his cousin Reyna Jackson. He is older than she is, but the two grew up playing together. His Father was Latin-Russian which is why his name isn't American. His father was shot on duty...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
Name: Melody
Hero Name: Lotus
Nickname: Melly
Appearance: Dark green hair and eyes.
Age: 16 yrs.
Abilities: Melody controls plants. Her hair can turn into veins and grow Цветы by her control. She can communicate with plants and grow them by her will.
Relations:Ashley is her best Friend. Друзья with Nate, Phfi, Jaivus, Kaya, Akash, Koda, Akash and Ashley.
Attitude: Friendly, caring.
History&Past: Melody had a rush childhood she was abused sexual, verbal and physical by her alcoholic Father. He also did this to her mother causing her fair him so she never reported the abuse to her nor her daughter...
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Martina blinded a few times before she was able to full open her eyes, her head was pounding from the mind-blast. She sat up, as she did she felt a paining sensation in her waist she grabbed hold on it noticing a slit and blood. She looked around but Nate was no where in sight. She stood up wavering a little then made her way down the mountain to the cave.

As she approached the cave her entire body ached еще so did the slit on her waist, she continued to waver until she enter the cave. She fell to her knee from exhaustion Superboy noticed the изумруд haired and rush to her shouting out her...
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posted by GlitterPuff
October 3rd, 1999

"Mommy! Daddy!"

"Rene, calm down."

"But, I wanna go in the castle!"

"We will go to the castle."

"Can we go now?"

"No, we'll go a little later. Look at the ticket line."

"Pwease daddy?"

"How about we get some ice cream first sweetie."

Okey dokey!" The father picked his daughter up by the waist and sat her on his shoulders. She wrapped her arms around his neck, not tight enough to choke him; but enough to hold on.

"Don't let her fall," the mother сказал(-а) cautiously.

"I won't." Rene giggled as her dad bounced her up and down on their way to the ice cream stand.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

About...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Haru
Haru
Warning Ты now; don't expect anything from the original character based off of the pics. Some things I will mimic but I give full credit to the ideas I use to those who created the original character. I promise, I'm not stealing. And I always use Аниме pics anyways. Just an FYI. Ok. Enjoy!!



Name: Haru
Alias: Yin/Yang
Occupation: Varied
Powers: Acrobatics, Martial Arts Expert, Can turn every день objects into weapons, Staff, Nun-chucks, Daggers, Shuriken, Sais
History: Haru is not his real name. He uses it as an alias to his real name due to a traumatic past he has all but forgotten. Sometime during...
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posted by DiscordYJ
 0-0
0-0
Inspiration? Monster by Imagine Драконы

Does it hurt? Yes..
Does it mock me? Yes..
Does it scare people? Yes..
Does it hurt people? Yes..
Does it cause pain? Yes..
Does it want her? Yes..
Does it want to hurt her? Yes..
Will I let it? Never..

This thing doesn't want me to love, its selfish. Blade. I'd kill it before it touches her. She makes it angry, uncomfortable, envious. If I gave it a chance, which I never will, it would kill her, rip her apart, and leave nothing left. She's scared, though she says she's not. I can feel the fear deep within her; I wish she wasn't, but it is glad she's...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Whisperer
Whisperer
Name: Nate
Hero Name: Whisperer
Powers: Nate has the powers to communicate with animals, shape-shift into any animal he chooses and also has the power to make others understand animal once he is near to then. Telepathic.
Age:16 yrs.
Skills Combat fighter.
Relations: Adopted brother to Phfi. Друзья with Melody, Kaya, Akash, Martina, Koda.
Likes: People who respects authorities, tigers, hawks.
Dislikes: Ashley 'cause he thinks she just a spoiled brat, Jaivus 'cause he is a Beetle.
Attitude: flirtation, protective, Law abiding, proud
Statue: Creatian.
History&Past: Nate/Whisperer is a Creatian...
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posted by GlitterPuff
"Get back!" She yelled as she continuously pulled the trigger. No one moved. "I said, get back!" The large mass of people ran back into their homes as the red head defended them. Bullets flew from everywhere, not even touching Rene.Something was keeping her safe; but no one knew what. She kept shooting over and over, but it was no use. A large group of men grabbed her and pinned her to the ground. She continued to shoot, blasting half of one of the men's heads off, causing him to fall to the ground with a puddle going around his head. Eventually, they threw the gun out of her hand and knocked...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 mysterious blue head
mysterious blue head
Aquapoint and Artemis aimed their arrows at the girl.
"We don't wanna hard you." Sparkfire сказал(-а) smirking, as she putted out an unusually spear. The boy slowly crawled down from the Стена and stood on the other side of the hallway surrounding the girls.
"Mafia Ты got your target right?" Artemis asked at which Mafia nodded yes.
"You and Aquapoint?" Mafia asked, sounding if they had already access their situation. Artemis and Aquapoint looked at each other at which Mafia smirked. Artemis switched directions suddenly and simultaneously both archers release their arrows. The two delinquents dodged...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
Name: Ariel Saskia Monroe

Occupation: Hero and Member of the X-Men

Hero name: Bubble Blast

Age: 16

Date of Birth: 6th April 1997

Type: Mutant, Human

Nationality: American

Hair: Platinum Blonde, straight, side parting but no side fringe, and it is also really really long (to the bottom of her spine)

Eyes: Cloudy, matt royal blue

Powers and/or ability’s:
Can create orbs/bubbles of energy или out of anything natural which includes:
-Lightning and other types of weather.
-Wood, metal and diamond.
-energy force field bubbles.
-basic combat skills
-Rather Flexible body.

Weaknesses:
-Too many blows to the body.
-Inhibiter...
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