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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing Ты to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Ты truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Ты start posting. It can be as little as a bio, или as big as an entire Статья series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no еще than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he или she is in, can pull out another trick out of his или her hat.
4. If Ты absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his или her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Болталка and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Ты have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Далее день you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own или is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Последнее outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, или claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Ты must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, или so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Ты do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot или stabbed in the heart, then pop up минуты later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull или flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to или dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to или dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing или potential character is a Mary Sue, или if Ты suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Ты can take link. If Ты want, Ты can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Ты were curious, which Ты probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Ты want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do Ты have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by GlitterPuff
October 3rd, 1999

"Mommy! Daddy!"

"Rene, calm down."

"But, I wanna go in the castle!"

"We will go to the castle."

"Can we go now?"

"No, we'll go a little later. Look at the ticket line."

"Pwease daddy?"

"How about we get some ice cream first sweetie."

Okey dokey!" The father picked his daughter up by the waist and sat her on his shoulders. She wrapped her arms around his neck, not tight enough to choke him; but enough to hold on.

"Don't let her fall," the mother сказал(-а) cautiously.

"I won't." Rene giggled as her dad bounced her up and down on their way to the ice cream stand.

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About...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Haru
Haru
Warning Ты now; don't expect anything from the original character based off of the pics. Some things I will mimic but I give full credit to the ideas I use to those who created the original character. I promise, I'm not stealing. And I always use Аниме pics anyways. Just an FYI. Ok. Enjoy!!



Name: Haru
Alias: Yin/Yang
Occupation: Varied
Powers: Acrobatics, Martial Arts Expert, Can turn every день objects into weapons, Staff, Nun-chucks, Daggers, Shuriken, Sais
History: Haru is not his real name. He uses it as an alias to his real name due to a traumatic past he has all but forgotten. Sometime during...
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posted by DiscordYJ
 0-0
0-0
Inspiration? Monster by Imagine Драконы

Does it hurt? Yes..
Does it mock me? Yes..
Does it scare people? Yes..
Does it hurt people? Yes..
Does it cause pain? Yes..
Does it want her? Yes..
Does it want to hurt her? Yes..
Will I let it? Never..

This thing doesn't want me to love, its selfish. Blade. I'd kill it before it touches her. She makes it angry, uncomfortable, envious. If I gave it a chance, which I never will, it would kill her, rip her apart, and leave nothing left. She's scared, though she says she's not. I can feel the fear deep within her; I wish she wasn't, but it is glad she's...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 Whisperer
Whisperer
Name: Nate
Hero Name: Whisperer
Powers: Nate has the powers to communicate with animals, shape-shift into any animal he chooses and also has the power to make others understand animal once he is near to then. Telepathic.
Age:16 yrs.
Skills Combat fighter.
Relations: Adopted brother to Phfi. Друзья with Melody, Kaya, Akash, Martina, Koda.
Likes: People who respects authorities, tigers, hawks.
Dislikes: Ashley 'cause he thinks she just a spoiled brat, Jaivus 'cause he is a Beetle.
Attitude: flirtation, protective, Law abiding, proud
Statue: Creatian.
History&Past: Nate/Whisperer is a Creatian...
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posted by GlitterPuff
"Get back!" She yelled as she continuously pulled the trigger. No one moved. "I said, get back!" The large mass of people ran back into their homes as the red head defended them. Bullets flew from everywhere, not even touching Rene.Something was keeping her safe; but no one knew what. She kept shooting over and over, but it was no use. A large group of men grabbed her and pinned her to the ground. She continued to shoot, blasting half of one of the men's heads off, causing him to fall to the ground with a puddle going around his head. Eventually, they threw the gun out of her hand and knocked...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
 mysterious blue head
mysterious blue head
Aquapoint and Artemis aimed their arrows at the girl.
"We don't wanna hard you." Sparkfire сказал(-а) smirking, as she putted out an unusually spear. The boy slowly crawled down from the Стена and stood on the other side of the hallway surrounding the girls.
"Mafia Ты got your target right?" Artemis asked at which Mafia nodded yes.
"You and Aquapoint?" Mafia asked, sounding if they had already access their situation. Artemis and Aquapoint looked at each other at which Mafia smirked. Artemis switched directions suddenly and simultaneously both archers release their arrows. The two delinquents dodged...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
Name: Ariel Saskia Monroe

Occupation: Hero and Member of the X-Men

Hero name: Bubble Blast

Age: 16

Date of Birth: 6th April 1997

Type: Mutant, Human

Nationality: American

Hair: Platinum Blonde, straight, side parting but no side fringe, and it is also really really long (to the bottom of her spine)

Eyes: Cloudy, matt royal blue

Powers and/or ability’s:
Can create orbs/bubbles of energy или out of anything natural which includes:
-Lightning and other types of weather.
-Wood, metal and diamond.
-energy force field bubbles.
-basic combat skills
-Rather Flexible body.

Weaknesses:
-Too many blows to the body.
-Inhibiter...
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Sorry this is a short one.


He glanced at the clock. She's supposed to be here by now... His hand reached out to grab his cup. The warmth of the coffee released the tension in his body, letting his mind relax and not worry. As soon as the колокол, колокольчик, белл on the bar door rang, the tension raced back when he saw her. Her red hair hair swung back and forth on her back as she went to get a drink. She turned her head to Nye and smiled. His green eyes grew tense; but he managed a wave.As she came back with a nice cold пиво in her hand, the boys body stiffened with fear. She grabbed the chair, pulled it out; and...
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 Alex AKA the Distraction
Alex AKA the Distraction
(well part two enjoy)

They walk in to the back of the stage and whisper in hush tones
"you know the plan so get ready" stated Alex before walking to the door heading to the stage
"well lets go brain" Ajax сказал(-а) jokingly before climbing onto the ceiling his black cloths blending in with the shadows
"right then pinky" Kane laughs straighting his tie and walking to Присоединиться the other people dancing.

Climbing through the vent was not his style but sometime Ты gotta do what Ты gotta do so he continued crawling through it. Looking through the vents he saw the people dancing, Пение wasn't what he'd...
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posted by SilverWings13
When Nic dropped his arms, Bentley nearly tripped getting to the bed. Aryess blinked several times in the bright light and looked up to her boyfriend. She grinned meekly as their eyes met for the first time in months.

Alek's struggled for air as his сердце kick-started. It took a moment for his breathing to return to normal, and by then, Tara had rushed over to him and thrown her arms around his neck. She sobbed with relief into his shoulder, and he shut his eyes , wrapping his arms around her torso. 

3 months later...

"Guess this is it."
"Not necessarily," she disagreed. 
"Italy's a long way from...
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posted by GlitterPuff
 Rose-Skull Civvies
Rose-Skull Civvies
OKAY! If any of Ты have ever watched Torchwood on BBC America или Netflix или wherever, Ты will scream bloody murder when Ты realize what episode she's from!

Name: Unknown

Alias: Rose-Skull

Appearance: Medium length black hair, fair skin, about 5 feet 7 inches, silver colored eyes (sometimes with red), a small tattoo of a demon on her wrist

Personality: She’s very nice to people she’s about to kill and acts sweet and trustworthy. Any other time, she is bitchy, mean, sarcastic, and rude.

Civvies: Black wide neck crop top, black jeans with grey suspenders hanging, black knee high high heeled...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
Ashley and the young beetle stood at the Стена as they both waited for her to recover from what she had saw. "You ok?" He asked, looking at her. She shook her head yes gently letting go of his arms.
"Do Ты know where to look of my sister?" She asked, and the boy smirk.
"Come over here." he said, moving to the table. Ashley followed, the boy when on one side of the таблица and Ashley stayed on the other. He pointed to an area that was circled off in red mark.
"How do Ты she's here."
"I followed her there." He replied.
"So Ты have a plan on rescuing Kaya?" She asked.
"Of course I do." He replied, with...
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posted by GlitterPuff
Name: Terpsichore Morison

Sex: Female

Age: 15

Appearance: Long розовый hair, blue eyes, fair skin, tall, skinny, wears Чтение glasses when needed

Personality: Sweet as candy, very paranoid about people (cause she thinks they’ll kill her), a little spacey, and shy around new people

Civvies: A blue tank top, gray sweater, jeggings, sport sneakers, small backpack, and an assortment of bracelets and earrings

Weapons: A handheld gun (usually in bra или her bag)

Skills: None

Powers: None

Past: Terpsichore lived in a very harsh crime filled neighborhood in New York City. Everywhere she turned, there were guns,...
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posted by Kurls_Basd
The волк charged at full speed to the trio. They all looked at each other not knowing whether it was headed for them или was it just pasting through, but there was no time to figure that out. They separated making room for the monster. The волк pasted but suddenly turned around. It howled and stood ground. The волк was all black with grey eyes and a much еще fuzzy tail than other wolfs. It howled once еще moving from side to side, it stopped, stared of a bit then suddenly charged at Aisling. Aisling pulled out an Стрела and drew her bow, running side ways she shot at the wolf. It dodged, jumping...
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posted by MafiaYJ
 Time keeps running off with out her..
Time keeps running off with out her..
Woman eternal,
She cannot die,
And ever день of her years,
She shall cry.
Woman out of time,
Who does not age,
Who harbors fear,
And harbors rage.
Angry daughter,
Along at last,
Time goes by slow,
But people go by fast.
Heavyhearted,
Wandering soul,
Awaiting death,
To take its toll.
A woman eternal,
May have no heart,
For it may end,
Before it may start.
Woman eternal,
Who cannot die,
Only one who calls on death,
And doesn't lie.

This is a poem about Babylon in case Ты wouldn't tell..and now i'm babbling because my Статья needs to be longer..ugh. Anyway, I hope Ты liked it. So tell me what Ты think.
posted by khanna266
Name:Elliot Rodriguez
age:14
Alias:DemonStar
Species:Sky demon
Powers:controls the wind,flying,reads minds,and sorcery
civvies:nothing special
hero outfit:none
status:in a relationship(i'm goin to put him and Klei together)
Family:all dead
BG story:He ran away from his Главная in mexico to find a new life that could be еще succesful. Where he met Klei and fell in Любовь with her in Gotham city.He's been with the young justice members since he got together with Klei.
Hobbies:Plays guitar,listens to music,does martial arts and kickboxing,

Hope Ты all like it.<3<3<3<3
please read еще Статьи by me please
 Klei and Elliot's dream wedding
Klei and Elliot's dream wedding
posted by Robin_Love
 Cat
Cat
Sorry for the bad ending


Her feet swung high above the floor from her сиденье, место, сиденья on the counter. He stood right beside her, mixing things in a bowl. The smell of печенье floated everywhere. She giggled when he put a dollop of frosting on her nose and he laughed when she tried to lick it off. He handed her a napkin, still laughing a little. She smiled and wiped it off as he pulled the now finished печенье from the oven.
“They smell yummy!”
“They have to cool before Ты can eat any.”
She pouted at him, her cat ears pinning back.
“How long?”
Scott smiled at her patiently.
“At least 15 minutes.”...
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posted by khanna266
name:Victor Sohma-Lee
age:17
alias:Cancer(the zodiac)
civvies:black short hair,grey eyes fair skin,doesn't have specific civvies
Hero outfit: Black tux and black hat
personality:mysterious but very sweet he's very quiet,and loves to cause a bit of mischief e very now and then.powers:calls for help of the spirits,black magic,shoots poison darts from wrists,and can speak to demons
BG story:Victor is very troubled and has a hard time concentrating on things,He was sent to Earth with his sister Rei to prevent the evil from spreading all over the Earth he would like to cause some mischief and find a Главная on Earth and areason to stay.He becomes best Друзья with Daniel Star'gei.
 Victor just arriving to earth
Victor just arriving to earth
Name:August robins
Age:14
looks like:long white hair,red eyes,6"4,girly
civvies:pink shirt,short jeans,gray ankle boots,black knee highs,black bracelets and belt
Haero outfit;red сердце shaped mask,pink mini dress with red сердце and a red cape that turns into a whip
Alias:Cupid girl
Powers:hypnotizesany boy villian to fall in Любовь with her and potions
weapons:cape that turns into a whip
family:unknown
friends:becomes best Друзья with Klei
BG:One день when August was 5 she woke up not remembering anything but her name at a train station and when she woke up she noticed she had gotten powers and had white hair and red eyesshe got her powers from a mysterious tornado while she was knocked out

btw when she was born she was born with red hair and blue eyes.

she has a massive crush on all the boys and doesn't want to decide who she likes most She even сказал(-а) Бэтмен and Супермен were cute.
<3<3<3
please comment
 her civvies
her civvies
posted by GlitterPuff
 My Rene Drawing
My Rene Drawing
Rene sat on the edge of the buildings’ roof, looking down and the people below. In her hands, she held a white wire пальто hanger. Slowly, she wrapped her fingers around the hook part, causing the whole hanger to glow a light yellow. The red head sighed as she let go of it, returning the hanger to its natural form. Rene stood up, walked off the building, landing on her feet at the bottom without a broken bone; and walked away.

As she came down a small alley way, a shadow passed over her. Quickly, she turned; but saw nothing but the brick wall. Shrugging, she turned and continued walking. Moments...
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