I wrote this and I don't know if we should use it should we??

Snow will lead the way though his icy mountains are gone
And Sharp claws will pierce the flesh of one he thought he could count on.......

The yellow herb will find her inner passion
The illness of fear spread like wildfire
A fog of blue will try to stop the evil illness with her compassion

Fear will grip the сердце of all but one.....
The one with the scar of evil
The scar from the sun

This is I don't think it is very good but your call Ты guys