My first Niall poem, "Love Divided" - Tell me what Ты think maybe? :3

Going somewhere,
Ending nowhere,
Where am I to go?
Wanting solitude,
Finding opposite,
Am I to walk alone?
You, there,
Across the field,
Of Фэнтези and fame.
Where did Ты come from?
How do I get to you,
Without crossing the flame?
Ты appeared out of nowhere,
A звезда suddenly born,
And I am drawn to your light.
But Ты can't see mine,
Its too dim to shine,
Never seen in the night.
Ты go on in life,
With it displayed to the world,
And mine displayed elsewhere.
Ты go on without knowing,
That I am here, waiting for you,
That I am always there.
And wait I do,
For Ты to see,
The imaginary girl who is always by your side.
The one with the smile,
The one with the voice,
That you'll never seem to recognize.
So Ты go on,
день after day,
With your lively life.
While I am stuck here,
Never near,
The one who seems to be my light.
Yes, that's right, Ты are my light,
And shine bright, Ты do.
Edges illuminated,
Flames engulfed,
For the one Ты never knew.
When I am down,
And I listen to your soft melodic words,
Of carefully chosen wisdom.
I know that someday,
Deep in my heart,
My день will surely come.
Ты bring me to my senses,
But Ты drive me insane,
You, the boy who's on the edge.
But I am on the verge,
And Ты bring me back from it,
Saving me from darkness.
Ты make me feel free,
Like I am surely alive,
Like Ты Любовь me with a burning passion.
But I am still a nobody,
Blending with the sea,
And I should just push past it.
But something about you,
Something I've never seen before,
Draws me to you.
And I smile in delight,
But frown in fright,
From how much I've fallen for you.
Though, why am I still nowhere?
Why am I alone?
Without you, I am lost.
Without you, I am unknown.

Sorry its so long and sorry if there's a typo. Please let me know what Ты think of it :)