What do Ты think of this poem?

The black rose describes him best.
Dark,just like his world is.
Dark,like his eyes.
But yet,you should take a good look before Ты touch it.
Ты may be hurt if Ты don’t watch closely.
Rose is so gentle,isn’t it?
So be careful,you might be hurt.
Careful what Ты wish,think twice first.
The petals are so soft and sensitive,you should know what you’re indulge.
The black rose is apart,she’s unique,just like he is...
Nobody can see the world he created.
He’s fearless,but he feels.
He’s cold,but he listens.
He’s mysterious,but caring.
He understands,but he no longer cares.
He’s empty,but awake.
He’s lonely,but he knows,without a goal Ты don’t live,
Ты just watch your life fading,without Любовь you’re so empty,
without understanding,you’re still there,in the world of your own.

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I like it.
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Thank you. ♥
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para-scence said:
that's really good! Ты got some talent! good job!
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Aw thank you. :)
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Vixie79 said:
I still really Любовь this one.
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:) Thank Ты honey. ♥
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You're welcome ♥
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sonicgirls555 said:
wow Ты got talent my friend
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:)
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Thanks a lot. ♥
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djsheshe said:
i really like this:D it means different things to me, but still paints a clear enough picture. really good. :P
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Thank you! :)
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u're welcome :P
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