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I need other writers to give me constructive feed on my Поэзия so I can improve it. Thanks! ") Especially this one. ^-^ teehee

Every night Ты tell me good night and a kiss,
I drift to sleep smiling in an innocent bliss.
Your language is broken but I understand,
I dream every night that you'd take me hand.
Your сердце is Золото though others disagree,
I wish they could know the Prince I see.
Your smile penetrates me just like your eyes,
I become giddy and frivolous- my Избранное high.
Your everything that I want in my heart,
I think I'll die when we have to part.