is this any good? its called rain.

i say i Любовь you,
Ты say lets just be friends,
my stomach twists like there is no end,
i feel this pain,'and when Ты walk away,
my eyes rain.

they rain rejection, hope, and dispare,
they rain my love, my cry for you,
they rain the feelings i had for you,
they rain the fact that i would die for you.