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Is this any good?

Help me,
I've fallen again,
No one put Ты can take away my pain.

My arms are sore from the cuts and tears,
My eyes are pricked with one million tears.

I feel nothing,
Your voice lingers in the back of my mind,
My hearts pulse is on overdrive,
It's about to explode,
или is that just me and my twisted, craving mind?
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Tremorzluv said:
If Ты have to ask if your own work is good,why bother Письмо it all if Ты don't believe in it.

P.S. There were a few errors.
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Thanks for the advice...I Опубликовано this from my iPod, so it auto corrected some of the words...I do believe in my work, but sometimes I need other peoples opinions...did Ты like it?
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TeamPeeta649 said:
I like it very much.
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Thanks! It means a lot!
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irena83 said:
It's good.
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Thank you!
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zutaradragon said:
i think it's good, but u can't doubt yourself when u write.
if u already think u r gonna fail b4 u write it, u WILL fail by the time it's done.
i've learned this a long time назад when i was drawing.
one или 2 mistakes can b fixed, but an entire paper can't b easily switched.
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i think it's good, but u can't doubt yourself when u write. if u already think u r gonna fail b4 u write it, u WILL fail by the time it's done. i've learned this a long time назад when i was drawing. one или 2 mistakes can b fixed, but an entire paper can't b easily switched.
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Thanks...and I realized about the mistakes...
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Thanks for jet advice!
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