Is this a good poem and do Ты think еще could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke или saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
Ты had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
или your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
Ты сказал(-а) it was akward
And that Ты still Любовь me
But I think I pushed Ты too far
What did I do
To make Ты push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want Ты in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for Ты even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if Ты want me back
Prove Ты won't hurt me again
Never again Ты will Ты hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
Ты fucked up









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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think Ты have to add anything else its perfect :)
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Thank you. Im glad Ты liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
MattxAliceNine posted Больше года
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
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Glad Ты liked it
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