what do Ты guys tk about this first line of this new poem that i'm writing?

Ты tell me that Ты
are forever haunted
by the memories that
controls every-part of
your, body, mind, and heart.
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MidnightTokyo47 said:
I think it's beautiful!
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Kat-chan said:
That is absolutely deep and gorgeous.
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FlyWithMeNickJ said:
i like it it's deep i'd like to hear the rest when it is done
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