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This poem is devoted to every girl who'sad and feels like nobody understands her...I'd like to hear your opinion.

Sitting in her room,listening her Избранное song over and over again...
Her head is full of thoughts she won't share with anybody but paper...
She's alone,no matter if there's somebody around.
She's alone with her thoughts,trying to get away,to suppress the dark side of her soul,to kill every dark thought that travels through her mind...
And remember,dream is just a fantasy,you won't escape from your fear,you won't find your cure dreaming better days...
And she cries only when she's alone,so nobody can hear,and she prays for the день when the Sun will shine again,the день when she will feel the joy of life,the purpose will be bright...

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NICE WORK!!! its nice!
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i understand all thiz
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GaGaBoi said:
Personally i think she needs to get laid.
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LOL
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LOL!
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WOW!!
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LuvWeezy7 said:
Just so Ты don't freak out i am stating MY opinion. :)

I thought it sucked. Maybe it was good for your level of work but to me it wasn't all that great.
This must be just me but, it wasn't put together all too well. Some words didn't fit in there and other words didn't even exist where they needed to be.

Other than that Ты do have a good idea i must say.
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Sorry for being a critic. I just have a thing for Письмо and your mistakes bugged me. :( Please don't take this personally.
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No,it's ok. I like honest answer.
irena83 posted Больше года
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well,i'm not american,and therefore i can not express myself the way i want...
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xxXsk8trXxx said:
Honestly...me and most other girls I know are nothing like that at ALL.
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Thanks for being honest. But this poem is about barriers that should be broken. One Холодное сердце moment of sorrow.
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How emo. Why are there no happy poems anymore? Do all poems have to be about some type of 'sorrow' that's ruining your life?
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thanks
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depp-fan said:
ITS VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!
I Любовь IT
GREAT JOB!!!!!
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thanks honey.
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Goth-Girl-36 said:
i Любовь it! it sounds alot like me.
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amethyst44 said:
i Любовь this. Поэзия is something Ты should pursue. ;) <3
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;) thanks a lot.
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energizerbunny said:
I think it's a good poem, I believe there are girls like this, I may not know any but I think there are and I feel sorry for them
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Jamie38459 said:
It's a sad poem, so very true,that it was made 2 the others who R feelin bloo. Sorrowful and a painful life, that (maybe) only we can tell, that she'll feel down everyday, and may feel worse than hell(maybe).
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nice comment... thanks.
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Ur welcome :)
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skillet_luvr said:
I like it. It's really good. :)
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zanesaaomgfan said:
Funny...That reminds me of some girl at my school, who has issues...She touches Ты in uncomfortable ways that Ты couldn't explain, she asks to be her friend when your in a bad mood, she laughs when somebody else can't answer the Вопрос but when the teacher calls on her she stays quiet, and she laughs at her own insults, so if Ты say, "Oh, Ты stink!" She'll freakin' laugh like your insulting yourself. Shes such an idiot! Thats why I refuse to be her friend!
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Maybe Ты should be her freind, you'll find out that people can surprise Ты like I did
K5-HOWL posted Больше года
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If she touches my boobs, like she did today, should I? Umm no.
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zutaradragon said:
sounds like me...
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TheFunnyChick95 said:
Completely describes me. Thank you... :)
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What!?
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josh-ada said:
OMG!!!!
ITS SO LOVELY POEM!!!!
i m not like that girl but that poem made me cry :(
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Thanks...
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DWLoverTBCEDT said:
that's beautiful, I Любовь it
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K5-HOWL said:
Yup
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aw i like it....
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fabstar said:
luv it :)
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JB4E said:
I Любовь the poem, I simpily Любовь it.
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Vixie79 said:
I Любовь this one. Like I сказал(-а) before, I'm so glad I'm not the only one that feels this. For years I did. Some of my fantasies have been such agony, because I never could experience them. This poem was simply written truthfully and straight forward. I Любовь it! ♥
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