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Heyy tell me what Ты think of this poem i wrote. I wrote this poem cause i was recently backstabed by someone i called my bestfriend. (Btw let me know if i need to change anything to make it better или any suggestions please & thank you)

Bestfriends are suppose to help Ты up when you're down, Not help Ты make your way down. Bestfriend should care & Любовь Ты for who Ты are, Not what Ты look или act like. Bestfriends should know the real you, not the fake you, Bestfriends should never make Ты change, They should like Ты for being yourself. What's the true meaning of a bestfriend?
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afsha1997 said:
oh good but it's not rhyme sorry. Ты should write like these
best Друзья supposed to help Ты when Ты are sad
when everything wrong everything is bad
my best friend leave me alone when i need her
now there's nothing just dark blue colour
why did Ты betrayed me i'm feeling all alone
feels like my сердце falls to pieces now i'm gone.
i knw my also weird :P
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That good:] bettr than mine
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