Will Ты read my new story & tell me what Ты think?

Hi! I started a new story a while back called "Undesirable." It's about a teenage girl struggling with depression, and trying to get over the loss of her sister. I only have one part up so far, but if Ты guys like it I'll continue writing. Just Комментарий on the Статья and tell me what Ты think! Thank Ты (:

Go here to check it out : link