So I wrote this song for my girlfriend and I'll give it to her on our 2 months anniversary.. so please tell me what Ты think of it

Our Love

Ты have a smile that takes me to another world
It leaves me speechless, without saying a word
Ты have flawless eyes, they're like a gift from Lord

I can't live without you
Cuz you're my heartbeat
If Ты wanna set Далее to me
There's a wide open seat
If Ты wanna take it
Just come and make it
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our Любовь at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably Ты don't know that Ты mean
The whole world to me

and if I had a звезда for everytime Ты made me smile
I would be holding the night sky in my hand
We'll just forget our tears, and walk that mile

I can't sing without
Cuz you're my melody
I can't survive without you
Cuz you're my remedy
Don't leave me alone
Cuz it won't be
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our Любовь at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably Ты don't know that Ты mean
The whole world to me

(Bridge):
When Ты need me I'll be there
Just to Показать how much I care
When Ты cry I'll wipe your tear
When Ты scream I'll fight your fears

(Chorus):
This is our Любовь at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably Ты don't know that Ты mean
The whole world to me