What do Ты think of this poem? Is it too wierd или depressing?
Caged
It’s my life yet I’m not permitted to live it
Because I’m sick of the tiny little locked cage
Did nobody tell Ты the most important thing?
Little girl’s gonna grow up someday, honey
The день has come when the box is too small
Ты repressed, demoralized child’s matured
She’s become – shock horror – a teenager
Just an isolent сука and nothing more
Ты say she shouldn’t eat so much
But Ты force her to stuff her face
Ты say her skin’s bad, why?
Ты the one who never taught her to wash it
It’s as if you’ve completely forgotten what your life was like
When Ты were a ticking time bomb
It was so long назад that you’re too old to remember
We all know Ты were a model child
Ты do realise that it’s all your fault
Ты kept me prisoner in ignorance and секунда hand clothes
The time’s come now that I can see
Ты never fulfilled your purpose so I was forced to find other means
I know what I want and I’m gonna get it
I’ll be nasty and cynical and rude
The face of the typical teenager
Who throws her tantrums and slutty lingerie
It actually didn’t have to be this way
Ты could have loved me, as Ты should have
But now I’m bleeding defiance and hurt
And it’s too late for Ты to change a thing
Caged
It’s my life yet I’m not permitted to live it
Because I’m sick of the tiny little locked cage
Did nobody tell Ты the most important thing?
Little girl’s gonna grow up someday, honey
The день has come when the box is too small
Ты repressed, demoralized child’s matured
She’s become – shock horror – a teenager
Just an isolent сука and nothing more
Ты say she shouldn’t eat so much
But Ты force her to stuff her face
Ты say her skin’s bad, why?
Ты the one who never taught her to wash it
It’s as if you’ve completely forgotten what your life was like
When Ты were a ticking time bomb
It was so long назад that you’re too old to remember
We all know Ты were a model child
Ты do realise that it’s all your fault
Ты kept me prisoner in ignorance and секунда hand clothes
The time’s come now that I can see
Ты never fulfilled your purpose so I was forced to find other means
I know what I want and I’m gonna get it
I’ll be nasty and cynical and rude
The face of the typical teenager
Who throws her tantrums and slutty lingerie
It actually didn’t have to be this way
Ты could have loved me, as Ты should have
But now I’m bleeding defiance and hurt
And it’s too late for Ты to change a thing
She fell to the floor and wept, and the jar shook
The день ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her сердце sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her сердце was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no еще pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
The день ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her сердце sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her сердце was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no еще pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically Письмо this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 год old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 год old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 год on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave Главная and find help herself.
So yeah, if Ты liked this, please Комментарий and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 год old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 год old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 год on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave Главная and find help herself.
So yeah, if Ты liked this, please Комментарий and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)