How to Add Emotion to a Story
1. Understand Ключевые слова или Key Phrases. Key Phrases are phrases in a story that triggers the waterworks. They are sentences that make people cry. Such as, a pet dies. Ты could write, "Goodbye, Old friend." A Key Phrase could also be an action. Such as, there are two pets. One pet dies. The other pet tries to sleep with the other one by cuddling up to the dead body.
2. Add a lot of relationship between the one who dies and another character, whether that is a human или an animal.
3. Add comedy to the story. Ты can find several joke Книги at book stores или at your local library.
4. Do some research about your audience Find out what makes those particular people laugh. A guy who slips on a banana. Kids may not get adult jokes, and adults may think kid jokes are crude. Either way, research whatever makes the person the Книги intended for (children, teens, или adults) laugh.
5. Add a couple of twists to the plot. Make something seem like it's going to turn out bad, but doesn't. For example, someone's grandmother is in the hospital, and the doctors think her life is over. Then, by some miracle, или just by luck, the grandmother turns out OK. That, или she recovers. Be creative, and never give up hope.
6. Paint a picture with your words. Visualize the scene Ты are describing. Be there. Taste, feel, and sense everything around you. Now open your eyes. Try to describe that picture. Make sure to sprinkle your sentences with plenty of word tools, (examples: Metaphors, Similes, Personification, Alliteration, hyperbole, and onomatopoeia). Instead of saying, "The wind blew through the trees." Ты could say, " The biting wind howled and moaned as it rustled through the tree's icy limbs, and shook the дерево straight down to the core." Make sure it's not a run on sentence either like "Sally went to the mall and shopped for shoes and then for a dress, that was a total of 13 inches in length and then she went to McDonald’s and ate a burger with fries and then met a girl named Jinny who had a dog named frisky who liked frisky dog biscuits and peed on the диван, мягкий уголок and then went home." Draw a word picture. The text of a book is a portal to an imaginative world.
Warnings
• If Ты just try to use clichés или things you've read to make people feel emotions, your story may fall flat. It's hard to make other people feel something if Ты don't feel it yourself. Think about times when you've felt happy или sad in real life, not just when Чтение other books. The еще Ты put yourself into your story, the еще real emotion it will have.
1. Understand Ключевые слова или Key Phrases. Key Phrases are phrases in a story that triggers the waterworks. They are sentences that make people cry. Such as, a pet dies. Ты could write, "Goodbye, Old friend." A Key Phrase could also be an action. Such as, there are two pets. One pet dies. The other pet tries to sleep with the other one by cuddling up to the dead body.
2. Add a lot of relationship between the one who dies and another character, whether that is a human или an animal.
3. Add comedy to the story. Ты can find several joke Книги at book stores или at your local library.
4. Do some research about your audience Find out what makes those particular people laugh. A guy who slips on a banana. Kids may not get adult jokes, and adults may think kid jokes are crude. Either way, research whatever makes the person the Книги intended for (children, teens, или adults) laugh.
5. Add a couple of twists to the plot. Make something seem like it's going to turn out bad, but doesn't. For example, someone's grandmother is in the hospital, and the doctors think her life is over. Then, by some miracle, или just by luck, the grandmother turns out OK. That, или she recovers. Be creative, and never give up hope.
6. Paint a picture with your words. Visualize the scene Ты are describing. Be there. Taste, feel, and sense everything around you. Now open your eyes. Try to describe that picture. Make sure to sprinkle your sentences with plenty of word tools, (examples: Metaphors, Similes, Personification, Alliteration, hyperbole, and onomatopoeia). Instead of saying, "The wind blew through the trees." Ты could say, " The biting wind howled and moaned as it rustled through the tree's icy limbs, and shook the дерево straight down to the core." Make sure it's not a run on sentence either like "Sally went to the mall and shopped for shoes and then for a dress, that was a total of 13 inches in length and then she went to McDonald’s and ate a burger with fries and then met a girl named Jinny who had a dog named frisky who liked frisky dog biscuits and peed on the диван, мягкий уголок and then went home." Draw a word picture. The text of a book is a portal to an imaginative world.
Warnings
• If Ты just try to use clichés или things you've read to make people feel emotions, your story may fall flat. It's hard to make other people feel something if Ты don't feel it yourself. Think about times when you've felt happy или sad in real life, not just when Чтение other books. The еще Ты put yourself into your story, the еще real emotion it will have.
Me and Those
Ever noticed that in this life
Everyone wants Ты to do something,
или be something
That sometimes Ты don’t want to be?
They are those!
Ты know them!
Ты probably have those in your house.
They are those who expect Ты to take a path,
Even though,
Sometimes,
Ты don’t want to take.
They are those who expect Ты to be great,
Even though,
Sometimes,
Ты prefer to be small and humble.
But do Ты think,
For the slightest second,
That they care about that?
They don’t!
They are your parents,
Your grandparents,
Your Uncles and aunts,
That since Ты were born,
Came up with a path for Ты in life.
But know this,
And say it to yourself:
They are those, they matter,
But me is I,
And I’m the main character.
Sitting right where Ты are
Ты have no claim on me
I know my own path
I am my own guide
Ты are nothing to me
No matter how Ты try
What do Ты care?
If I'm not doing it right
I'm not following you
I know my own path
I am my own guide
Ты don't know me
No matter how Ты try
Why are Ты here?
Ты know I don't want you
I told Ты to leave me
I am my own path
I know my own guide
Ты can't mold me
No matter how Ты try
Why do I feel compelled to write angsty poetry? I swear I'm not even that angsty. LOL Oh well, I hope someone out there enjoys it.
A whisper in the cavern that goes unheard,
and a glimmer in the sky that stays unnoticed,
like the start of a brand new life, at the peak
of a mountain never scaled, lies in wait.
It can't be moved by any cosmic mover,
so no passing wind или fog will douse it.
Only your eyes can scratch out the image
или accept it, the light at the edge of your eyes.
Will Ты take hold of the key you're offered?
Stop Пение of freedom; seek it instead?
To become a companion of the new
takes an ever expanding, soaring gaze.
But even by taking one step forward,
by placing one hand onto the mountain,
as the wind tugs gently at your back,
Ты will realize the cage has already been broken.
and a glimmer in the sky that stays unnoticed,
like the start of a brand new life, at the peak
of a mountain never scaled, lies in wait.
It can't be moved by any cosmic mover,
so no passing wind или fog will douse it.
Only your eyes can scratch out the image
или accept it, the light at the edge of your eyes.
Will Ты take hold of the key you're offered?
Stop Пение of freedom; seek it instead?
To become a companion of the new
takes an ever expanding, soaring gaze.
But even by taking one step forward,
by placing one hand onto the mountain,
as the wind tugs gently at your back,
Ты will realize the cage has already been broken.
Once i was having a день dream about this story. And it brang me to this. A story about AshleyxDamon.
Chapter 1: Sunset
Sitting in an oak tree,a young 13 год old was Письмо a letter to her father in Tokyo. He was doing research. Then her twin Austin came. "What are Ты doing here?," she asked. "I Любовь the sunset", Austin said. "That's why i'm here," Ashley said. They watched the beautiful sunset and went in they're vintage home. "Ashley who is the letter for,"Austin asked. " Dad," she answered. "Dinner Ты guys," there mother said. And they went inside.
Credit to breebree446