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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. By no means am I forcing Ты to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless Ты truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before Ты start posting. It can be as little as a bio, или as big as an entire Статья series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no еще than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he или she is in, can pull out another trick out of his или her hat.
4. If Ты absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his или her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely Болталка and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when Ты have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the Далее день you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own или is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the Последнее outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, или claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If Ты must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, или so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if Ты do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot или stabbed in the heart, then pop up минуты later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull или flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to или dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to или dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created by you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing или potential character is a Mary Sue, или if Ты suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, Ты can take link. If Ты want, Ты can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case Ты were curious, which Ты probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all Ты want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, by no means do Ты have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by BladeYJ
((I'm here to apologize...I should give up on this since the last time I Опубликовано was over three months ago...But I can't I need to finish for the sake of Blade and the fact that is change her as an OC, so I'm giving a brief summary for those who haven't read или don't remember from the other parts. BASICALLY Blade wakes up. Has memory. Goes to find terror and get away from rapey Damian. Finds out terror is "with" a girl..and goes back to Damian. He basically makes her forget who she is by shooting her up like some drugs btw those who haven't realized she's also missing her left eye, that's YOUR...
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posted by Robin_Love
Darkness had overcome the city, another moonless night. He stumbled down the street, leaning on the Стена when his feet couldn’t hold him alone. His clothes were bathed in the night, black as they were. His eyes were clouded over and he stopped to catch his breath. The few people left on the streets glanced at him as they passed. It was odd for someone so young to have so many issues. He took a long drink from the cup in his hands before throwing it away with a huff.
He continued on his way, hunched over as he made his way home. Главная was an optimistic term for the abandoned shack he had found....
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posted by Robin_Love
Just some facts about my ocs that I thought you'd like to know

"Strange" Fears
Becca: Thunder
Tara: Darkness
Devin: Demons
Cat: Batman
Dylan: People
Blaine: Rats
Lance: Power
Terror: Unknown


Избранное Animals
Becca: Ravens
Tara: Wolves
Devin: Peacocks
Cat: Foxes
Dylan: Tigers
Blaine: Horses
Lance: Hawks
Terror: Cats

Избранное Colors
Devin: Sky blue
Becca: Red
Tara: Burgandy
Cat: Purple
Dylan: Green
Terror: Black ((Becca: Like your soul!))
Blaine: Silver
Lance: Bright blue

Избранное Weapon
Becca: Magic
Devin: None
Tara: Guns
Dylan: Scythe
Blaine: Kunai
Lance: Sword
Cat: Claws
Terror: Hands


Might do another one soon. Hope Ты enjoyed!!
posted by DiscordYJ
((SO this is all taking place after that Deception series I wrote(and never finished but I am Письмо an epilogue to finish it off). Anyway. Like R_L сказал(-а) this was a mutual agreement. Couples break up. It happens. I would like to thank her for being so awesome and calm about it. ily. anyway this is Blade's side))

She paced back and forth in her own apartment. The light outside had disappeared as if giving up on her and leaving her without any support in this decision. The darkness had shrouded the den, not a single light in sight. The curtains had been drawn and all light-switches cut off. She...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Fly and be free
Fly and be free
He watched her face, looking for any signs of manipulation. But her face was resolute and sorrowful. He felt the fear of her worry. He closed his eyes, forcing himself to believe it was happening. Because it was and for good reason. But that didn't stop the heartache.
"Don't worry; I understand."
Her tears fell and she hugged him, touched him for what very well could have been the last time.
"Thank you. I was so worried.."
"You don't need to be."
She pulled away and looked at him. He gently cupped her face and kissed her forehead. Then looked her in the eye.
"Go and be free of all things, Blade Howard."...
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posted by Eclipse-YJ
Name: Pandora Maria Elizabeth Diana Alice Ruby Rouge-Spade

Nick Names: Pan, Phoebe, Phoebs, Love, Moonshine

Occupation: Hero, Magical Ambassador and Gardian to Earth, Spy/SHIELD Agent

Hero Name: Eclipse

Age: 17

дата of Birth: 25/12/1997

Type:Human Host, Goddess Soul, Human weapon

Nationality: American, French, Canadian, Japanese

Hair: Dark Brown (almost black) или some times a fair shade of Blue (it changes in the sun) has a side fringe that covers one eye and medium hair in a side parting)

Eyes: изумруд Green

Powers and Ability's:
-Powerful and God-like Magic (to a certain limit) and...
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posted by Robin_Love
 Nurse Becca
Nurse Becca
It appeared to be night by the time her eyes had opened. Everything seemed stranger; slower. She tried to Переместить her hand and found herself strapped down. She started to panic, eyes looking for anything within her grasp to help release her arms. She let herself relax when she saw a friend in the corner, eyes closed, but at peace and alive. She had no real idea if it was because she was held down, but she couldn't feel much. The constant buzz in her head had disappeared, along with the reality of time, it seemed. There was something going on but she relaxed and breathed in deep breaths. Her eyes...
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posted by Robin_Love
Sorry I haven't written anything in forever! Summer is not the time for me. But here's a small something for ya.




He hadn't meant for this to happen. He wasn't meant to start loving her; she just clawed her way in. He had found her during a particular night time rounds. She was sleeping in a cardboard box in the back of a shipping warehouse. That was the reason he was there after all; she was having a nightmare. It wasn't the first one she'd had, but one of the worst. So he'd come to take care of it. At first, he couldn't believe his eyes, she was so small. Her body fit in the box perfectly,...
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posted by Robin_Love
His raven hair dripped crimson blood to the mistreated battle field. The spear had long been removed from his head but the bleeding went with the hours that had passed in useless war. His breathing was slowing; he could hardly see the outline of who had been his king through his icy blue eyes. It was a bloody fight, all lives Остаться в живых except his and his king's. Now, he fought off the clouding death penetrating his senses.
“I had hoped for better with us.”
He smiled sadly at the word's his uncle spoke.
“As had I, my lord.”
“You tried to overthrow me and kill me. Treason is cause for death....
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posted by DiscordYJ
((BECAUSE SAD SHIT MAKES ME SAD..))

"Can I come?"
"No..."
"Please!!!!!"
"Uhg B-"
"PLEASE..."
"This won't be a good idea.."
"Since when is anything we do a good idea..."
"Fine.. Ты can come."


~

Blood flooded from her mouth as he held her close. He was willing to be the barrier between the girl and the silver bullets whizzing past them. So far he was doing good, suffering only minor scratches from the brush he was plowing through.

But the girl? She suffered a shot to the shoulder and stomach. The skin was bubbling up like a burn and her coughs were becoming еще faint as the red liquid, she needed to...
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posted by DiscordYJ
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Inspiration? Monster by Imagine Драконы

Does it hurt? Yes..
Does it mock me? Yes..
Does it scare people? Yes..
Does it hurt people? Yes..
Does it cause pain? Yes..
Does it want her? Yes..
Does it want to hurt her? Yes..
Will I let it? Never..

This thing doesn't want me to love, its selfish. Blade. I'd kill it before it touches her. She makes it angry, uncomfortable, envious. If I gave it a chance, which I never will, it would kill her, rip her apart, and leave nothing left. She's scared, though she says she's not. I can feel the fear deep within her; I wish she wasn't, but it is glad she's...
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