poetashish

Hi, I really like your poem. Опубликовано Больше года

poem,,,,,,if anythng wrong plz correct it

(I)every time has meaning,
meaning has no pretend mean,
tht time i saw something,
from which i got a trouble life..........
(2)when surrounding life became a heap,
indeed i was like sweep,
огонь was on burning ,
rain continue on blowing,,,,,,,,,
(3) utter in my few words
tht become a rush ,
getting into poem of my life
words become sentence of light
.......ashish sharma Опубликовано Больше года

if ths magic create me like ths to write poem ,,,,which i never thoght ,,,my words become sentence,,, Опубликовано Больше года