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The decision to bring the group to the sandstone cliffs was mainly because it was one of their last безопасно, сейф places to go and it was, again, another callback to an earlier story and another old location to go back and visit. The chess board was a massive piece of foreshadowing which I don’t really do, but when I got the idea for it, I couldn’t not do it. Having the pieces set up with the two kings in the middle was foreshadowing the climactic battle, where there’s Humphrey’s army on one side and Viggo’s army on the other side. And the two of them meet alone in the middle.

This was Viggo’s way of basically saying that this is how all of this will end, and he breaks Humphrey’s piece because he, of course, plans on it ending with Humphrey’s death. And in the end, that’s exactly what happens. When the climax starts, all of the Волки are waiting behind Humphrey and all of the humans are waiting behind Viggo with them facing each other alone in the valley. I also knew that I could make it work because Kenya was with the group and because she had been a pet for a long time, she would know some human things that the others wouldn’t, and that fact opened up some fun possibilities down the road.

Having Viggo ambush the group at the cliffs was something I did to drive the group from their last безопасно, сейф haven and force them to go back to the ruins of Humphrey’s pack, which was something I had planned from pretty early on. I wanted to bring them back to where everything began and of course for another callback.

Viggo’s origin story and his motives for wanting to kill Humphrey was probably the thing that had the most thought put into it out of all six of my stories. Even “The Остаться в живых Tale” didn’t have as much time and effort put into its making than Viggo’s backstory. I worked really hard to make sure that it made sense and was believable дана the circumstances, what with the humans and Волки aging the same and all the history I had already created by the time the thought of his backstory came up.

I don’t remember exactly what I started thinking about that made me start putting his backstory together, whether it was putting him in A Hero’s Past или deciding it would be a cool plot twist if he was responsible for Kate and Humphrey’s trip to Idaho in the first movie. It grew from one of those two, but I can’t exactly remember the thought process that went into it, so I’ll just explain it in chronological order. I will say that age and passage of time was very hard to make work and a lot of timeline changes happened, but I was eventually able to get it to work. And of course, as the story progressed, I had to go back and change some minor details in A Hero’s Past to make it work, such as giving Jack a burn mark on his side, which was something that he didn’t have originally.

I knew something tragic had to happen to Viggo to give him such an intense hatred of wolves. He was obviously an avid outdoorsman so I decided that he and his parents would go out camping a lot. He had to be young when they died because of stuff that was setup in A Hero’s Past. It couldn’t be Humphrey for numerous reasons like the fact that by the time Humphrey would be old enough to kill them, the first movie would be happening. And it couldn’t have been Humphrey’s parents because they were omegas and never really went on hunts или patrol. So, it ended up being his grandparents. As for Viggo’s hometown, it ended up being the one where Kenya was taken to in A Hero’s Past simply because it was the only town located inside Jasper Park.

I also had to make sure to touch on all of Viggo’s abilities; his tracking, his intelligence, his martial art skill, so I did a short bit talking about his childhood and how he gained all those skills. It did end up making the timeline pretty tight because by that point, I had decided that Viggo would find the Central Pack and see Humphrey’s birth when he was twenty, so he would need to graduate high school early in order to get the proper amount of tracking and martial arts training he had at the time.

This is one of those times where I don’t exactly remember how I came up with something. Figuring out Viggo’s age and where he fit in the timeline is something I don’t remember much of. I knew he had to be older than Humphrey but after that, I can’t think of what I did to decide when he was born. I’m thinking that I didn’t want him to be too old in The Final War. Since he was older than Humphrey, that would put him at at least over forty-seven in The Final War, since that’s how old Humphrey was. He would still have needed to finish school and take time to acquire his skills, so I picked twenty as a good age for him to be when Humphrey was born, making him twenty years older than Humphrey, which I then used to figure out his birth year.

A Hero’s Past was long since finished by the time I started figuring out Viggo’s backstory, so explaining his placement in A Hero’s Past was easy enough since all I had to do describe what the Mysterious Man went through from his perspective. One little detail I included in A Hero’s Past was that I made sure to only have the Mysterious Man present in chapters with Humphrey in them. At first, I had wanted to put him at the end of every chapter, but then I decided to only do the ones with Humphrey to raise that Вопрос of “what does this guy want with Humphrey?”

Viggo’s original plan took a lot of thinking on how to make it work but still be believable. In the end, I did as best as I could and hoped it was good enough. It was definitely out there, and I figured the fact that he didn’t want to put himself in danger by trying to kidnap Humphrey and Kenya himself would make up for that.

Explaining Viggo’s specific hate for Humphrey was another thing I was worried wouldn’t be believable enough, again because of the circumstances. Viggo wanted to kill Jack and Mary for killing his parents, but since both of them, and Humphrey’s parents were dead, Adam, Humphrey, and Kenya were the Далее best options. Obviously, Adam was guarded by the rest of the pack, which would be suicide if Viggo went after him, so that was out. Kenya had already been adopted and at the time, Viggo wasn’t interested in getting into any legal trouble, so that was also out. That just left Humphrey, who at that point was Остаться в живых somewhere in the woods.

This hate and want to kill Jack and Mary later turned into a want to destroy Humphrey’s entire pack, and Jack and Mary would just be the starting point, which also made his hate for Humphrey еще believable since he was one of the last survivors.

As for why he hates Humphrey specifically, that’s because of another character trait I partially drew from myself. Viggo hates to be bested. He hates losing constantly and he hates being outsmarted, something that becomes very noticeable later on in The Final War. Humphrey constantly getting away from Viggo and escaping throughout A Hero’s Past and in the first movie continues to make him еще and еще frustrated because no matter what he seems to do, he can’t catch him. But Viggo’s not a quitter and doesn’t give up no matter what, which is why he keeps trying to go after Humphrey. His anger and frustration mixed with his perseverance is what creates his incredible hatred toward Humphrey.

Viggo thinks pretty highly of himself as well because he’s such a great hunter and tracker and is good at pretty much everything. So, when he sees that Humphrey continues to evade him, that frustration later turns to admiration because in his head, if Humphrey is good enough to constantly get away from him of all people, then that makes him a worthy opponent.

Another difficult thing to figure out was how Viggo wouldn’t get Humphrey when he was all alone after he was separated from Arnold. I first stopped Viggo with the freak storm that would later trap Humphrey under a tree. Obviously, since it was such a large storm, Viggo would be forced to stop and wait it out while Humphrey continued on.

Then I had to stop him from setting out early in the morning because Humphrey wouldn’t be found and saved by Kyle and Owen until midday and Viggo would surely catch up with him by then. So, I figured with a such a strong storm, Viggo’s belongings would be scattered around the area, so he would need to spend quite a bit of time cleaning it up and finding everything.

The last time I had to keep Viggo from getting Humphrey was after he was banished from the Northern Pack. By that time, Viggo had been camping outside the pack for a год and was right there when Humphrey went out on his own. I ended up relying on dangerously low visibility. Having it be a pitch-black night in the middle of the woods, Viggo would’ve needed to stop and set up camp for his own safety.

This whole time, I knew that at some point in Viggo’s history, he served in the military, hence his fit, healthy body and general habit of keeping in shape. I figured the seventeen-year time jump from Humphrey’s acceptance into the Western Pack to the first movie (the fact that it ended up being seventeen years again was completely coincidental), would be the perfect time for Viggo to not only serve in the military for a little bit, but also build his feared reputation as The Wolfslayer. And this, of course, is the moment when the audience finally finds out that Viggo and The Wolfslayer are one and the same.

There are a couple of times throughout the story where I drop a small hint of redemption in Viggo. One of those times is in this chapter, when Viggo says he felt strangely proud at seeing Humphrey grown up after he returned to the Western Pack. One short moment where he didn’t feel an intense hate for him and had a bit of humanity slip through.

Another thing I was excited to reveal was the twist that Viggo is the one responsible for Kate and Humphrey’s trip to Idaho in the first movie, and better yet, he was there the whole time, always arriving just after the camera cuts away, или always standing just off screen. It was fairly easy to put him in the movie, without him being in the movie. I literally just put him in the fourth wall. The train scene is the best example because there’s one shot where Kate and Humphrey get on the train as it passes by, and I had Viggo standing just behind where the camera was.

Newest Additions was a scrapped story about Kate’s pregnancy and the formation of the Rogue Волки in the months after the first movie. But I didn’t have enough ideas and wasn’t all that motivated to do it, so I scrapped it, but still consider the ideas I did have to still have happened. Kate would’ve obviously been unable to hunt so I figured Humphrey would have to do it for her. Also, their law-breaking marriage would’ve angered some Волки who would eventually break off and become the Rogue Wolves.

Viggo framing Humphrey for the murder of a волк to try and get him banished is one reason why I scrapped this story. I was hard pressed for ideas for the climax and a way to cause the Rogue Волки to split, which ended up turning into what I got. However, I’m okay with it still having happened because with the story scrapped, the details around it can be very vague, and now I can just say that somehow, Viggo was able to do it instead of having to explain how he did it in еще detail than that. Stinky’s namesake ended up coming from that as well, since he was able to uncover a faint hint of Viggo’s scent. However, once I actually decided to write the story, all that got scrapped and became irrelevant anyway.
(this song is dedicated to buddydevos so he has something different to sing to his GF. this song is written by metalwolf and metalwolf only, i want full credit cause it is MY song created on the spot)

Verse 1:
i am the shield
i am the sword
i am the fix
i am the torn
i am the string
yet i am chord
i am the dead
yet i am the born

Bridge:
I am the saviour of this life
through the good, bad and the strife
you are the black and i am the pure
you are the sickness and i am the cure

Chorus:(your GF sings the non bracketed parts) (brackets for Ты to sing.)
guard me (when they come to kill)
take me (i wanna feel the...
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later

humphreys pov

it was the ultiment showndown which was part of the ultiment destiny Волки Волки and еще Волки as far the eye can see and it could go on for a century necks begin bitten and legs torn off it was the bloodiest battle that the world ever saw but was won easily "its over we won" humphrey сказал(-а) "yes its over (panting)" kate said

kates pov

the battle is over and the pups are at the parents логово, ден "hey huphrey i'm bored can we have fun (giggles)" kate сказал(-а) "sure" humphrey сказал(-а) he began to mount me slow and soft and graudaly sped and made me climax 5 time and we finished when he climaxed and we cleanded up picked the kids up and headed Главная but the sky began to rip apart and everything was sucked in

THE END!!!!!
Brandt woke up suddenly, he felt as though he had been hit by a truck. but when he awoke he discivered that he had some new attributes, Wings and a red Halo over his head. He thought that this was the best thing that ever happenned to him. but then he thought of his old self, and Flash of red light engulfed him and returned him to his 'orrigional' evil state.

Meanwhile back at Humphrey's den, Kate walked in and asked "Have Ты seen Josh? Because he left for a hunt last night and hasn't come back yet."

"Hold on Kate, I'll try to find him." Humphrey vanished into thin air, but returned shortly...
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It was close to midnight, there were no sounds in the forest exept the static coming from alpha 3's communicator.

Alpha 1: "Alpha 3 what's your location. over."

Alpha 3: "I'm about 5 clicks from the-"

Alpha 4: "THIS IS ALPHA 4 I NEED HELP NOW! GAAAHH..."

Alpha 1: "ALPHA 4 COME IN OVER."

Alpha 3: "Sir Ты need to get to the rondezvous, there's somthing Ты need to see. over."

Alpha 1: "And what is that Alpha 3?"

Alpha 3: "you wouldn't belive me if i told you."

Writers note: it's not the best story in the world. in the Комментарии tell me if Ты think i should make chapter one of "Alpha Team"
posted by Red_Pyramid206
It is now 2012, and I am a high ranking officer in the military. My name is Chris by the way. I am now on my way to see the outcome of a new experiment called K-9X. We tested it on some Волки found in Jasper Park, Canada. The project was supposed to turn them into anthros as the artists of DeviantART say. I heard one of them was a female. Heh, who knows? I may have a shot with her. Anyway, I was walked down the hallway to the K-99 lab and stopped in front of a door with a biohazard symbol on it. I held up my ID and scanned my eye. "Welcome Officer Chris." the computer said. "Thanks Xero."...
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posted by REDWolfleader
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Me
I was walking through the forest, trying to find a new pack since my parents died. So I was walking through the forest and suddenly I she волк walked out.
"Who are you?" She asked me
"I'm David."
"Oh I'm Kate"
"Nice to meet you, uh do Ты think I could Присоединиться your pack?"
"Well come with me we'll ask my dad."
"Okay."
We walked into a large clearing, and then into a den.
"Hey dad? Can David stay and live with the pack?" She asked a male wolf.
"Yes he can. David? I am Winston, Were Ты an Alpha или Omega in your last pack?"
"I was an Alpha, and already have been trained"I announced
"Good.Kate,you know that...
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(ALL LYRICS IN THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN ALTERED FOR PURPOSE BY ME)

Following the shadow that shot lilly, Garth left the безопасно, сейф confines of the jasper metal festival and followed the shadow with a vengeance, with a burning in his сердце into a dark neck of the woods.

The darkness seemed to claw at his soul and envelope his body as he run through the thick growth of life trying desperately not to lose the hated shadow. Scraping through the trees the branches seemed as though they were purposely trying to hurt him- of course "life seemed pointless now" after what had happened.

after what had seemed like...
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Dustin's POV

As we were making our way to the notorious northern pack I couldn't help but wonder what their pack leader might say to me once he finds out about my powers. 'Ah well doesn't really matter… does it?' I quickly answered myself 'Nah, if he doesn't like it I can always take over and control the pack. But nevertheless I'm going to try a peaceful resolve to the situation, because really… who wants to control a bunch of mindless reta...'

"So Ты can change into one of those swimmy things right?" One of them asked

I was shocked by the stupidity of what had just happened so I quickly...
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posted by UriahA
Humphrey has Scar in his arms as he woke up. She was so sweet, he was glad to have her. She woke up without Humphrey noticing and rolled over, still making him think she was asleep. Out of nowhere she yelled right into his face.
“Ah frick!”
“Haha, got you!”
“Man Ты got me good.”
“Humphrey.”
“Yeah?”
“I… I know this kind of backward of what it’s supposed to be but I… I have a mate that passed away and I know he wants me to be happy.”
“I know.”
Scar got on her knees, “Will Ты marry me?”
“Oh, Scar! This is so unplanned! The way we propose makes me feel...
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posted by EightySix
Name - Eight
Appearance - A mixture of Dark and Light brown fur. Light brown mostly on his underside. Topped with a shaggy mane running the length of his back. Eight is smaller, but стаут, толстый looking, moderately muscled.
Theme; Have it All - Jeremy Kay

Happy-Go-Lucky best describes Eight's average attitude.
Since he is the youngest of all eight pups in his family, he was taught by and takes many traits from each of his siblings.
Velvet taught him leadership and sense of duty, Tough taught him to fight and he learned Любовь and kindness from his sister Whisper. He gains his temper from Cowboy and his...
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Dustin's POV

I woke up to the morning sun shining in my eyes, I blinked a few times to clear my vision and figured that I had slept in longer then I usually did. My head was still spinning from everything that had happened the Назад night. I found it hard to take in that I was a shape shifter and that the myth was true. I didn't want to tell anyone because I knew they wouldn't believe me I also don't know how to control this power. Then it hit me I could go out and practice this new power and not be bothered. I decided I would go to that small lake where I would always sit and think. I walked...
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*As I Headed towards winstons логово, ден I felt really happy of what happened because I did not really like going to school(Truth)*
“Yay after getting this IPHONE 4 its Awesome” I say
“Just one problem I can’t hold onto it while walking and Its running out of juice”I say
“Juice?”Says Humphrey
“Juice…..”I Say Slowly
*Humphrey Looks At Me Confused*
“Which Makes The Hunters Cars Go!”I Say Shouting At Him
“Ohhhhhh……..”Humphrey Says
“Which means I need a solar panel a power converter a circuit connector and a usb slot….”I Say
“Or Ты could go to the rangers lodge no one ever...
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With each волк nearing their positions, all they now waited on was for Benjamin and Eight to круг the heard. Jayne had already signaled the two, The location of the herd was known - about 30 yards ahead and they were in luck, being downwind already, they wouldn't have to change direction или take any longer than they needed to make the trek.

The pack had taken only минуты to get to where the herd rested. Twenty yards between them and the rest of the Lioness' territory was a ravine, only just deep enough to stall the мул deer as they needed to locate various narrow game trails to cross...
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posted by REDWolfleader
"Well get some rest and we'll meet the guys in the morning."
"Yes sir!"
"Well I'm going to go and look at the sky." I walked out of the cave with my head low looking at the dirt and grass, and went to my Избранное spot... a bank of a pond. I stared at the beauty I saw in the water, which was a reflection of the stary sky, then I looked up and stared. After awhile I went back to the cave and slept.
"Rise an shine, Lieutenant!" I сказал(-а) to K.
"Huh?-Wha-Oh right."
"Lets move." we went to the spot were the recruits were and started training.Hours later I decided to go on a hunting trip. I told K to take...
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The Monday after I got out of the hospital I needed help carrying my school Книги and I was approached by Kieranalpha and she asked 'Need help?' and i сказал(-а) 'Sure that would be nice' and she helped me out the whole день and when we went back to the house we did our homework together and had a great conversation till Uriaha walked in his nose bleeding and сказал(-а) 'Alex Ты were supposed to help me fight those guys' and i сказал(-а) 'Well i forgot mister grouchy pants' and then his mother came out and saw Uriaha and demanded 'What happened!' and Uriaha сказал(-а) the one thing he could 'Mom i ummm... got into...
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It was a usual Saturday morning and i was going to my Друзья apartment and it was on main улица, уличный so i got in my Ford bronco and went to start it but it didn't turn over then i remembered what i learned from Katealphawolf/Or/Jon and i pumped the gas a bit and tried to start it again and it started i backed out of the driveway and drove east twoard main улица, уличный when i arived i saw the spring festival going on so i сказал(-а) 'Dam it!' i shut off my bronco and headed over and i was stoped by a guy he сказал(-а) thrre dollars admission and i payed him and went walking into the crowd and i walked for and bit...
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posted by AlphaWinston1
The three stooges(Salty, Shakey n' Mooch) were hired to be Winston's caretakers when one день Winston found out his Избранное shirt's воротник had brown stains on it and сказал(-а) "Hey Ты idiots! I told Ты to wash my рубашка properly! I don't like brown stains on anything. Understood?!" "Yes sir!" they replied. Salty took it and wash it right away. A few days later, Winston heard awful cracking noises coming from the washing machine in the basement. He immediately came down rushing and сказал(-а) "What the fuck is that cracking noise?!" "You told us to wash any brown stains on anything so we washed the dirty чай cups 'cause it has brown stains all over inside as well!" they replied politely.
 Moe: Shakey Curly: Mooch Larry: Salty
Moe: Shakey Curly: Mooch Larry: Salty
posted by alpha7272
I remember sleeping in the corner while the commanders were talking among themselves, while everyone was messing around not having a care in the world that we were in one of the most dangerous places in the world. Then out of no were I got hit in the head with the end of a gun, I look up to see it was Garth. “What the Hell is wrong with you?! ” I screamed. “Wake up масло, сливочное масло cup” he сказал(-а) with a smirk on his face. Then Brik came in and сказал(-а) Knock it off Garth, he put his hand on his face and pushing him straight on his ass. It was then I remembered that Garth and Lilly, Humphrey and Kate...
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Eight and Deogee trekked on, their paws treading up the ground behind their steps. They paced along the treeline, where the growth of tall трава and wheat was stopped by regular daytime shade making way for the forest to begin. This was the edge of the once golden field that lay in front of the логово, ден rock. The день cooled some, but the sun came out now to hang dimly in the sky. It was after mid-day, but not quite late afternoon. Most of the jobs around the clan had been done, leaving the feel of a lazy день all around.
Eight moved on with the old wolf, away from the den, away from the pack. They...
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Humphrey spent the Далее 12 weeks in the hospital and he was full of tubes and stuff like that but some how he was geting better he still wanted vengance against Wolfiey but he couldnt sleep this night cause he thought What if i had not made it through? I would have never got to make it right and got a chance to say to kate about my depression but then sunddenly out of no where humphrey flatlined kate yelled into the hall 'Code Red Humphrey Is Flatlining' the doctor and nurses came in and they Did three charges from the defibulator but nothing it was only 5 days later that he jolted to life...
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