Is it OK for me to write insults about Twilight while Чтение it for a friend's sake?

Not to her, it would be rude.

But seriously, if you're Чтение it for the first time, Ты should put an actual effort into keeping an open mind and done read it with the mindset that Ты need to find something to insult.

YES!!!!!!!
who does'nt?

that's your choice. It isn't a crime.

If Ты think they'll find it funny? Go ahead. I had to do the same just to get through the thing without throwing my kindle against the Стена in frustration.
If it's to insult them, then no. Leave it out, even if it's just good-natured ribbing; no need to stir trouble for the sake of it.
I don't know Ты или your friend, so its up to you; just giving my thoughts.

Yes it's your opinion