I Know it Sucks Dx but What Do Ты Think?

Of these lyrics I wrote, obviously they aren't done yet but I just want to know if it's still good. I think it sucks because I cannot write lyrics for my life.

"It's time to face the destiny. just stand in time, release the flames. Every день Ты just see the sights,


Chorus

Stand tall, stand now and see what we're fighting for. Die now, die trying. We all just live in big shame, incomplete history. Listen to those who care."